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Sitting In Daydreams
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Sitting In Daydreams |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SITTING IN DAYDREAMS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I gazed at the ocean, calm it was, and serene… Surf coming in, strange, it’s you I have seen… More delicate than most, no smile, perhaps in pain… Emotions hidden inside, another tear seen, again… Beauty perceived in my eyes, mine, of the beholder… Deepness of me whispers, come, be my abductor… Sitting in daydreams, not knowing if real… My hand is what I give, only, if you’re able… ~~~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful Bill. A nice Monday morning daydream. Sandra |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The hand of sanctity... Nicely done, again.. still.. as always..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Nice one enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful read this morning as usual Bill. ~Monday morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC...yet another of your tranquil writes with such feelings... Enjoyed...thanx |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so softly beautiful and inviting Bill.......just wonderful this monday.... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I am sure she is able and willing to reach out and take the hand you offer her...Beautiful writing...always heartfelt and gentle enough to make me sigh...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is so tender and sweet, dearest friend, I know with all my heart you will find her always and take her hand and forever walk on rainbows and meadows with the woman you love forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Bill, beautiful lines here, "Deepness of me whispers, come, be my abductor…" Take you away will she? lovely write, floria Floria |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Bill..lovely write! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Beauty perceived in my eyes, mine, of the beholder… Deepness of me whispers, come, be my abductor… That's a great verse, Bill. Nice place to sit. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling boy, it’s utterly utterly fabulous. My soundless Oh of admiration, my breathy sigh would tell anyone who saw me that I’ve just been to the soul filling station and been refilled with sighs of Bill. This is another of your utter utter best darling boy. *This is excellent and as always I love it Your writing always makes the keeper list, excellent writing as always    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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