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we were whispers

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 02-18-2002 09:42 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

we were whispers
behind the trees
speaking of dream colors
and lover dance music
we touched finger ends with oneness

I knew your eyes
for the first time
when you brought them
in bowls of discover
as gifts to place on my lap

you spoke to my hands
as they wore your scent
you were damp earth
they were tree fingers
growing inside your water

we spoke of mornings
and tall grass beds
where weavers made us
into carpets of magic
and winds gave us sky

our souls went walking
to somewhere place
we watched them go
and prayed for their pleasure
we blessed them

as though we were gods

İDark
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The Shores of Alone


1 posted 02-18-2002 10:50 AM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Beautiful. The imagery is flawless.
Sandra
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with you


2 posted 02-18-2002 11:30 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

when you write like this, I just *sigh*
I love this
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3 posted 02-18-2002 11:31 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Your on a roll today dear friend..........just soft and exquisite........sighs.........*w*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Somewhere in time~


4 posted 02-18-2002 11:59 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

My mind searches for words, which elude me at this moment, to describe how this leaves me feeling.  This is beautiful...and I sigh deeply.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 02-18-2002 01:27 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms Catmoon....thank you so much

SEA, it pleases me to please you

Gentle 1, wear my kiss prints on your wrist

Enchantress...know my thoughts
wear them there...

Thank you all...
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DS,

    This is so tranquil and peaceful. You captured those things perfectly.  This gets a big SIGH from me

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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By the Seaside


7 posted 02-18-2002 01:43 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

where weavers made us
into carpets of magic
and winds gave us sky

Like a magic carpet ride?
Love the way your words soar DS~

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 02-18-2002 02:04 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Tara, thank you hon, for your reads and replies..

Lori, thank you for stepping on the carpet..and sitting for a while

Honeybee
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9 posted 06-20-2004 10:13 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Sigh frieken sigh ...this is gorgeous...you take imagery and life and love to new heights.  You really have a remarkable style.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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