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Roger Leewright
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since 1999-09-25
Posts 28
Beaverton, OR.USA

0 posted 2002-02-18 04:58 AM


How can I describe the
the way the sun shines through your hair
unto your face....
Or how the wind makes your cheeks
blush with the color of wine...
How can I describe how
my reflection shines so iridescently
in your eyes....
Or how graceful your body moves
to the rhythm of an UN-heard melody....
How can I describe the
sweet aroma drifting back to me
as I follow quietly behind.....
Or the pain I feel when
tears fall slowly from your face
to be mixed discretely in the rain.....
How can I describe the
tenderness in your soft voice
as it coaxes my complete attention....
Or how you make love to
the very essence of the man
that I am....
How can I describe
this feeling of being
alive......



© Copyright 2002 Roger Leewright - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-02-18 07:19 AM


Roger,
I like this is was very soft and sensual. You need to check your spelling and I believe Discretely (separate) should have been Discreetly (prudent). Other thean that it was good.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
2 posted 2002-02-19 02:28 PM


Roger:  It is very hard to describe the wonderful feelings you get when you are in love.  Your words are very tender and flow beautifully.
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2002-02-19 02:32 PM


*sigh* I would say you have described it perfectly...This is incredibly tender and filled with love...I love it!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-02-19 02:37 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we're all so happy for you and all wish for the greatest joy to come to you forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Roger, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-02-19 02:53 PM


Roger!  Wonderful feelings coming through on this one!  Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-02-19 03:21 PM


Ahhhhh.....sighing deeply. Lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
7 posted 2002-02-19 04:45 PM


well, Roger, i think you just did!! and very well, might i add!

nice job!

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-02-19 05:10 PM


Ditto what Doreen (who often beats me to the punch) said!
Wonderful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2002-02-19 05:34 PM


Hello Roger

Such a beautiful, romantic picture you have painted here.  So very much enjoyed by this reader.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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10 posted 2002-02-19 09:04 PM



Keep trying, I could read some more....

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