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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-02-18 01:19 AM




My days are loud
and demanding

Occasionally
I see a clock
and count the hours
until I sit here
either with you
or thinking of you

My nights are silent
and at ease


© Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-18 01:32 AM


Duncan, I like this silent reverie, that shouts of love.
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2 posted 2002-02-18 01:49 AM


Thanks Kacy, it's nice to know we often keep the same hours.  I have a friend who used to live in Alaska.  I asked him what it was like there, this time of year.
I've got three words for you.
Make that move.  lol

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3 posted 2002-02-18 07:35 AM


How I love to wake up to your words, especially on a Monday. Just seems to make the week go better, when I start it with a smile like this.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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4 posted 2002-02-18 09:13 AM


Duncan, I do love reading your thoughts. nice. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-02-18 09:30 AM


That's the way love goes, beautifully expressed.
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6 posted 2002-02-18 10:14 AM


Nice and soft, Duncan. Love speaks.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-02-18 10:23 AM


Duncan,
That pretty well sums it up. Enjoyed

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with you
8 posted 2002-02-18 11:53 AM


Hey Cowboy

*sigh*

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9 posted 2002-02-18 11:55 AM


Duncan, I like it! It shouts to me.
((Duncan))
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10 posted 2002-02-18 11:57 AM


Duncan - Very nice sentiment to this one.  Nicely done.

Dave

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Canada eh.
11 posted 2002-02-18 12:08 PM


...Ain't love grand!...

Sure gets you through those rainy days and Mondays.
Nice write Duncan...Hugs, Nancy.

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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12 posted 2002-02-18 01:31 PM


Duncan,

      You read my mind.  I cannot tell you how many times I find my eyes moving to the clock, counting hours and minutes until I get to talk to my love *sighs* Very nice cowboy

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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13 posted 2002-02-18 02:07 PM


Yep, you are in love! I know. Every minute apart feels like punishment.

This is charming and you (two) are sweet!

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