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poeticdreamer
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0 posted 2002-02-17 10:41 PM


Drawn within her ecstasy

Where love warms manhood

One and more powerful

United in flaming embrace

Joyous tears dripping from every pore

Sliding down skin of exploding desire

Eyes talking to eyes

Alone together in moments worth years

Nirvana pressed between two bodies

Two lovers introduced to sweet forever

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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-02-17 10:58 PM


pd,
Passiondreamer more like! I liked it.

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-02-17 11:10 PM


I enjoyed this nirvana you write of.

amusemi
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3 posted 2002-02-17 11:57 PM


Wonderful paint!
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4 posted 2002-02-18 12:14 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever find nirvana of true beauty and love and feel embraced in loves warmth forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

doreen peri
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5 posted 2002-02-18 01:18 AM


moments like this are reasons to live.....

beautiful verse!

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