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Hallucination
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0 posted 2002-02-17 09:59 PM


"Complete"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

V1:
If I knew what to say
I'd told you already,
But my heart's a bit shy
So bear over with me.
It feels like yesterday
I met you and said hi,
How was I to know we'd
Fall in love over night.

L:
Who'd thought we'd come this far
Now I'm on bended knee,
And I'm asking you this
Girl will you marry me...

C:
Now please say you will
Let me know, you love me still,
The gift from your heart
Will make me Complete.
You're my everything
In your love I am drowning,
The gift from your heart
Will make me Complete.

V2:
I feel the time is right
I take you by the hand,
Promise I won't let go
I'll always be your man.
Let's seal it with a kiss
Once and for all this time,
It's like a dream come true
And tonight is our night.

L:
Who'd thought we'd come this far
Now I'm on bended knee,
And I'm asking you this
Girl will you marry me...

C:
Now please say you will
Let me know, you love me still,
The gift from your heart
Will make me Complete.
You're my everything
In your love I am drowning,
The gift from your heart
Will make me Complete.

B:
I feel the magic
whenever you're near,
And from my eyes I
cry these happy tears.
Tonight I'm gonna
give you all my heart,
A love that will last
no matter how far...we're apart.

C:
Now please say you will
Let me know, you love me still,
The gift from your heart
Will make me Complete.
You're my everything
In your love I am drowning,
The gift from your heart
Will make me Complete.

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-17 10:00 PM


Wow, bry, you have outdone yourself on this one!
Hallucination
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2 posted 2002-02-17 10:06 PM


Wassup JB!!

Thanks man, I thought so Too!!!
It's diffently going to be put to music
at some point!!

Best Wishes,

Brian.

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3 posted 2002-02-17 10:09 PM




YAY!!! You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful serenade that is bound to melt her heart forever! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a fabulous song! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-02-17 10:09 PM


Brian,

   This is wonderful I can almost hear the melody playing in my mind... I enjoyed

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Hallucination
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5 posted 2002-02-17 10:21 PM


Hey Noah & Tara,
thank you guys so much, it means alot, more then you'll ever know.
I think it's going to be a chart hitter, if I can get it out "JUST" right.
Thanks again.

Best Wishes.

Brian.

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