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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-02-17 05:47 PM






Down the esplanade
of tapestry embellished lanes,
my heart goes twirling by
with toe shoes on pointe.
A rich ballet of love songs
filling the sustained
chords of adagio
with delightful, grand plies'
My heart dancing
round and round
whirling past
the hour of love
in swirling, rond de jambe.
My heart stepping closer
and closer to yours
dazzling you with
its sweeping movement
of love and forever,
of its heart and soul finale.

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-17 05:49 PM




(smiles) WOW!!! Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet freind, your gorgeous words always have my heart dancing and leaping in a pas seul of daydreams! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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with you
2 posted 2002-02-17 05:52 PM


very pretty
doreen peri
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3 posted 2002-02-17 07:38 PM


this made me do a double pirouette and a grande jete

nice job!

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4 posted 2002-02-17 07:41 PM


The finale is the best part!  

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5 posted 2002-02-17 07:44 PM


Enjoyed so much Ivy Rose.  Wonderful to watch as the poem dances across the page.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-02-17 07:44 PM



I would like to watch this, for I figure what I would see would be just as lovely as what I've just read...

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7 posted 2002-02-17 09:56 PM


Ivy Rose, the title just grabbed me and am I glad it did, this is so wonderful. I truly enjoyed it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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8 posted 2002-02-17 09:57 PM


yay, loved it!@
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9 posted 2002-02-17 10:47 PM


Ivy..a little away from your norm...but so
delightfully so...

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10 posted 2002-02-18 05:08 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
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highways, & byways, for now
11 posted 2002-02-18 06:45 PM


Ivy Rose - great write, enjoyed reading this.

BC

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