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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-02-17 04:27 PM


Moments In Paradise

The Norwegian Star has arrived.
A beautiful ship now docked pier side.
The tourist embark to enjoy island sights.
Sun covered beaches and tropical delights.
Romantic sunsets and hula shows under
majestic palm trees sharing tropical breeze.
Swim, surf, sun and rest all within reach.
Now is the time to let go of stress
and relax on a Honolulu beach.
Let us hope each one finds the joy
their soul does seek for soon these
moments in paradise will be over and
they face another work week.

JamesLee
February17
2002

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1 posted 2002-02-17 04:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, how beautiful it would always feel to go to the beach and relax after each long day; I wish I lived near a beach so I could relax! (big hugggssssss) May paradise fill your heart everyday, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-02-17 04:44 PM


You've brought a picture to mind
that I remember so well.
Those cruise ships are an awesome sight, like a city out at sea.  
They seem to appear out of thin air only to move on in a matter of days.  
Nice write James.    

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-02-17 08:45 PM



It's the getting there and coming home that's stressful, y'know?

But you make it sound so worthwhile...

JBaker515
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4 posted 2002-02-17 08:47 PM


James...I muched enjoyed!
Magnus
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5 posted 2002-02-17 09:42 PM


JM...if it were not for a 16 hour plane
saga,  I would go there again...soon..

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-02-17 09:42 PM


HAHAHA Great one James, and those vacation weeks are tooooo short indeed. like this a lot. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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7 posted 2002-02-17 09:54 PM


James,

   Oh this is definately what I need... A nice relaxing week with the one I love.....

.......  Ok now that I woke up LOL.. I enjoyed this

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Larry C
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8 posted 2002-02-17 10:03 PM


James,
See...I was afraid of that. The boat left without me! And all I got...well what I got was a cool poem! (No jealousy here.) :<

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