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Open Poetry #19

Dawn

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-02-17 04:00 PM

Behold the rising of Lord Helios;
retreat of night, its darkness broken,
by the breath of dawn’s first glow,
another day in splendor woken.

In distant meadow, songbirds sing,
heralding of night’s begone,
crest to crest, day’s light advances,
shadows of the night withdrawn.

Cascading over man and beast,
Upon the earth, new day imbues,
God’s palette from the heaven’s high,
Pastelled rose and crimson hues.

Sun’s rise frozen in the east,
for but a second, time stands still,
nature stands as one with God,
in the glory, of dawn’s fulfill.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-02-17 04:04 PM

I like this!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-02-17 04:26 PM

Tim--Gorgeous!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-17 04:39 PM

(big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! WOW!!! I love this, may God and Mother Nature forever embrace in the heavenly reunion of life and birth of beauty! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

4 posted 2002-02-17 08:20 PM

i have always admired your writing.

this piece is no exception.

you have a wonderful way with wording and a talent with meter and message.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-02-17 08:23 PM

enjoyed

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-02-17 08:44 PM

This...is a poem.
And a keeper.

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