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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Weaving in and out of what is real Ether wakes ethereal. Conscience... Blue. Black is sin! White is in a sense innocence I’ve been called a dog before A brutish one at that |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Walter, I know just how you feel, I think everyone's opinions could differ in some way, though I too normally envision the colors like this, though they can always be re-arranged! (big hugggssssss) This is very thought-provoking, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I like that about our concience being black and blue sin! check mark!! you can move ahead 10 spaces just be sure to clean up after the dog. LOL |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you are coloring the barking of a poet's voice with truths in the rough this is succinct and powerful it's got a bite to it! fine work, walt!!! |
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