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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-02-17 02:16 PM


Twins at Heart

Take a look behind the scenes
At the many things that we differ
As opposite as we may seem
We're twins at heart, me and my sister

We're bound together for life
Whether we like it or not
No need to ask me twice
I'm happy with the sister I've got!

She knows me far too well
There's nothing I can hide
Even if I refuse to tell
She knows what I feel inside

Sometimes we have sisterly brawls
but we quickly forgive and forget
We are twins at heart afterall
I hate making my sis upset

She knows what buttons to press
If she wants to get me going
I love her dearly I confess
Forever our twin hearts will be growing


© Copyright 2002 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-17 02:18 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a gorgeous tribute to your sister, I just know Kim will always treasure this and through every difference you may have, you will always be twins at heart and you will always love each other so much! (kiss on lips) I love you, sweet friend, she will always be so lucky to have such a loving sister like you! I love you, my sweet Gwenevere!!! (showers you in kisses)



Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-17-2002 02:19 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-02-17 02:22 PM


I could say the same thing about my seven brothers and four sisters.  I like this very much.  I like the forgiveness and the love this portrays.  Just wonderful!

Michael

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3 posted 2002-02-17 02:26 PM


BRAVO!!!!What a wonderful dedication to your sister...this is so nice..she will love it...**big hugs** She is lucky to have such a loving sister

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2002-02-17 02:35 PM


My one sis died at a young age but thank God for my other sister..shes my bestfriend..and i love her very much..you cant stay mad at your sister...forgive and forget..blood is thicker than water right? although it is nice to forgive others too hugsss

                ~Vic

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5 posted 2002-02-17 03:43 PM


Joanna,
Great write. Gotta love those siblings! Nice job.

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6 posted 2002-02-17 03:51 PM


Joanna, this is absolutely wonderful. I believe that sisterly love is about the strongest love in the world. My sister and I often say that we are twins. We, too, are very, very close. And you write so beautifully! Thanks for sharing.
((Joanna))
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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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7 posted 2002-02-17 04:07 PM


Joanna, this is wonderful and I am so proud of you for writing a tribute to your sister.
This one sounds just like my sister and I.
Think I'll e-mail her now.....hugs sweetie!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

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8 posted 2002-02-17 08:45 PM


Hello Joanna

This was such a stunning dedication to the love and admiration you feel for your sister.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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9 posted 2002-02-17 08:48 PM


What a TRIBUTE!!

She should love it!.cause i did

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10 posted 2002-02-17 09:48 PM


Joanna,

     Awwwww I like this I am a sap for a good sister poem   They do know those buttons to push don't they I enjoyed!

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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11 posted 2002-02-18 09:45 AM


Hi Joanna, loved this so much, sounds much like my sis and I. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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12 posted 2002-02-18 10:00 AM


I love it, I have two sisters and I feel the same way.
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13 posted 2002-02-18 11:15 AM


RosePetal - Sounds like you and your sister definitely have a special bond.  Very nice.

Dave

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14 posted 2002-02-19 10:01 AM


1derful!
Your sister is lucky to have you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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15 posted 2002-02-19 10:56 AM


RosePetal - I hope your sister has seen this for she will know how precious you are to her...

BC

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