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Master
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0 posted 2002-02-17 01:38 PM



The lonely widow, Autumn danced,
remembering how it was,
while eager winds with eager hands
were tearing off her clothes

And no one thought that this was strange,
pretending nothing happened.
The lonely Autumn cried in rage
and puddles rippled, saddened.

© Copyright 2002 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-17 01:45 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Andrey, this is so sad but beautiful, you always create such fabulous visions with your words! (sigh) May Autumn's tears become the sunlight of spring and may Autumn wear the colors of beauty once more always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrey, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-17 02:17 PM


I suppose there is a distinct sadness associated with the autumn time. It is a time of death. In these few words you speak so much.

God alone is alone. Man is not.

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3 posted 2002-02-17 03:20 PM



It's nice seeing your work, Master!  Thank you for this!

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4 posted 2002-02-17 04:10 PM


Master, yes it's sad to slip into Autumn.

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Tim
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5 posted 2002-02-17 04:14 PM


Very nicely done. Enjoyed your poem muchly.
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