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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-02-17 11:27 AM


A little light

I light a little light at night to help me find my way
Because at night my sight's not right
Unless I light a little light at night
That I don't need in the day.

But in the day I'll just say that the sun is bright
So I don't light a little light that I light at night
For in the day I need some shade to hide the light
That helps my sight and is so bright
That's not there at night to help me find my way.

So I must find a little tree that hides the sun for me
Cause shade is made in the day and that way
I get enough light from the sun that's bright
But not too bright in the shade that's made
So I don't need to light a light to find my way in the day
And I can play during the day and I have sight at night
That's just right. Cause I light a little light at night.

Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
May 4, 2000

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1 posted 2002-02-17 12:01 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love your usage of alliteration and consonance in this, this makes the poem so fun to read when I read it to myself! (big hugggsssss) Your words are always sunshine to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-02-17 12:19 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for you loving thoughts.
((Noah))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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3 posted 2002-04-05 02:21 PM


liked it
Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-04-05 02:37 PM


Thank you, vandana.

((vandana))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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