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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-02-25 10:33 PM

Perspective…

There are stars
and stars

You live in yours,
low flung to the horizon
flickering lights
holding souls
some dim
some bright
neon stars of the night

My stars…
are not low
my head slung back
on my shoulders
my neck…
stretching…
my arms outstretched
in case one
should fall into my heart…

there are stars…
and stars…

I’ll take mine…
and leave you yours…
for I heard you
were happy living in them

and me…
happy to just be among
them…

my stars

seen in my poets’ eyes….

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-25 10:40 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful tribute to all the wonderful poets of Passions and the world, sweet friend, you are a true shining star among us all and always glimmer with loves messages! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is simply marvelous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-02-25 10:42 PM

You live in yours,
low flung to the horizon
flickering lights
holding souls
some dim
some bright
neon stars of the night

My stars
are not low
my head slung back
on my shoulders
my neck
stretching
my arms outstretched
in case one
should fall into my heart
==============================

I do so enjoy looking at the stars with you...things always shine brighter thru your perspective

this is lovely K!

"Never made it as a wise man
couldn't cut it as a poor man stealin
Tired of livin like a blind man
sick of sight without a sense of feelin"

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-02-25 10:47 PM

As I look at the heavens
I'll alway wonder
Twinkle, twinkle little star
Which star is hers?

Tell her this poet loves her
whereever she is
her star
so far

up there
high
in my starry sky.

I love you, Sunshine, little star.

((Sunshine))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-25-2002 10:47 PM).]

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2002-02-25 10:53 PM

Everytime I look up at the stars I trip over something!!

..but I AM a klutz!

May the stars shine down on you...

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-02-25 11:11 PM

Some very starry sunshine!

I just love the way you wrote this one, Karilea

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2002-02-25 11:31 PM

Karilea

Beautiful nightime beguile
looking at the stars awhile

from the chair rocking
sweatered and quiet talking

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2002-02-26 01:07 AM

May I come sit a spell with you as well?
Oh this had a big touch of "pretty" to it.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

8 posted 2002-02-26 02:17 AM

Beautiful.........
Hugs2uSweetSunshine
*~coco~*

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

9 posted 2002-02-26 02:36 AM

You are a star!!! The brightest of them all!!

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2002-02-26 07:36 AM

I love looking at the stars, Sunshine. They seem to be more beautiful now they I live in the country. Out in the open, you see them better.I never really noticed them when I lived in the city. I like this poem.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2002-02-26 04:03 PM

Hello Karilea

Beautiful images were relayed through your words. I loved this.

Take care.......Sue

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2002-02-26 04:39 PM

I see the stars in your eyes reflect the stars in mine

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

13 posted 2002-02-26 05:23 PM

Kari darling sister of heart and keeper of dreams truth, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION,

The stars that shine spell your name
Singing their own starry refrain
They shimmer in the night just for you
Speaking gleams that say me too

Little sparkles of silver burning bright
Touching you with soft starlight
They twinkle and shine, as do you
Shimmering touch softly true

The stars in your soul will never fade
Never to feel the doubt of shade
Gleaming brightly you hold them tight
Softly shining sun’s starlight

YOU are an absolute diamond and this is perfectly penned poetry

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

14 posted 2002-02-26 07:59 PM

Sunshine, Oh how I love this."in case one
should fall into my heart" Beautiful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

15 posted 2002-02-26 09:06 PM

Ya know, sunshine comes from the brightest star of all. I enjoyed this write...it really sparkled. ThisDiamond

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