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Fee
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0 posted 2002-02-17 01:52 AM


I close my eyes and
I can see you so clearly

The vision of your face,
your eyes, your smile
reflections in my eyes

Your voice echo's through
my mind, so calming as I
reflect upon your touch,
so gentle and inticing

Your embrace firm yet
relaxed as we melt into
the moments of each other

For it is here that we have
found a resting place for
our souls

A place where our hearts
become one
Always and Forever

My eyes open,
and I can see you clearly

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-17 01:57 AM


just beautiful!! I love the ending
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2 posted 2002-02-17 02:15 AM


Sounds like love to me, Fee.
"Your embrace firm yet
relaxed as we melt into
the moments of each other"
That is really wonderful.


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3 posted 2002-02-17 02:17 AM


peaceful piece
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4 posted 2002-02-17 01:16 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love the ending, this is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, may your eyes forever reflect the light of true love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-02-17 04:20 PM


A wonderful write!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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6 posted 2002-02-17 05:05 PM


enjoy
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7 posted 2002-02-17 08:44 PM


Hello Fee

This was so very beautiful and so much enjoyed.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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8 posted 2002-02-17 10:39 PM


and THAT is the way LOVE should be....

no Fee paid, only offered willingly......
........


a striking verse of beauty! thank you for the read!

Fee
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9 posted 2002-02-18 06:16 PM


Thank you all so kindly for your words.

It is funny how the heart can write, and the words tell the story and only then do we read the words and find the meaning.

Love you all very much.

Thanks Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

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