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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-02-16 11:43 PM

I won’t
take
for
granted
this
transplanted
enchanted
world

From wake
to walk
and back
again
each night
I dream
your name
All my life
empty faces
shameless places
spoke of you
said they’d
tell me
what to do

How could I believe?
my eyes were closed
now
they lay
open wide
to watch
the sky
and they
never tire

You are Haley’s Comet
missed you the first time
but not again
Come back to me…

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-16 11:52 PM

(big hugggssssss) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may she forever be your Haley's Comet and fill you with joy! (smiles) We all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-17-2002 12:19 AM).]

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-02-17 12:16 PM

wonder about that comet and the awe it inspired

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2002-02-17 12:42 PM

WOW! Awesome write here! Cool title also! I just loved this!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-02-17 07:24 AM

WOW...this should inspire you to a second round, same subject...

there's more here....

elisaseyes
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

5 posted 2002-02-17 10:07 PM

Uh oh, do I have competition? You better put that tail 'tween your legs and come to bed NOW... Only kidding Walt...love you

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

6 posted 2002-02-17 10:09 PM

WOW>>>.walter...you did this wonderfully!

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

7 posted 2002-02-24 03:00 AM

Oh walt, I agree with Sunshine "this should inspire you to a second round, same subject"...
A great write sweetie thanx4a terrific read2nite...
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (02-24-2002 03:00 AM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2002-02-24 03:04 AM

Walt-
Very cool write.
I'm liking this muchly!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

9 posted 2002-02-24 01:31 PM

I like what you've done with this.

Seems to ponder in slow motion. I wanna see it too.

Hope things are well.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

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