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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2002-02-16 10:16 PM


A Winter’s Night Part 4

Part 1 posted at  A Winter’s Night
Part 2 posted at  Strangers in My Home
Part 3 posted at  Home To Visiting Strangers


It should be much colder this time of year
There is snow in the mountains but not here,
Nothing but a cold drizzle mixed with sleet,
But it is fine for moods of misery,
As I stroll down the empty darkened street.

There are other places that I might be,
But they have invaded my privacy,
The silence is disputed with their talking
And thanking me for allowing to stay,
So for solitude I went out walking.

I am of a mind to send them away
Even knowing they’ve no where to stay,
They are the ones that came and now intrude
Using pity and past friendship on me,
The strain plays poorly on my attitude.

In the sleet is no where I need to be,
So I stop in a bar for some brandy,
But it’s the wrong place and it’s the wrong time,
But at least its warm and a place to dry,
My choices are only beer and cheep wine.

A place for thinking and let time go by,
I settle in and give the Red a try,
I took them in for only the one night
Since they had no relatives living near,
Taking them in and relieving their plight.

End Par 4

Gloom
This is only a fantasy, I would have tried the Rose’



[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (02-16-2002 10:28 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-16 10:24 PM




BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...your series is fantastic, sweet friend, I can't wait to see what happens next, I can picture each part of it and envision it as if it were a drama movie! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2002-02-16 10:32 PM


Thank you, Mistletoe Angel,
Quick with your sweet comment tonight, I was still playing with the links,
I hope they are working now.

Gloom

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3 posted 2002-02-17 12:08 PM


I'm still awaiting your capture with excited breath. Hehe...
((Gloom))
-newell

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Nan
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4 posted 2002-02-18 05:38 PM


White Zin all around...

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