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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2002-02-16 09:40 PM



Words are created
in flow of soul’s reverence
rushing forth with need
with greed, no temperance
heart will not be still
offer no silence
emotions rule
every nuance ~
all that I am ~
my very essence
having
little patience
to that which does not
give balance
to rhythm, rhyme
to inner cadence
allowing me
no distance
space or time
guidance
comes only
from brilliance
of sun, (in light of moon)
as my ocean’s tides turn
I admit, you are, my existence……..


~SEA~




with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......

[This message has been edited by SEA (02-16-2002 09:41 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-16 09:44 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, your gorgeous words are always such a pleasure and delight to readf, sweet friend, your heart always overflows with a love so pure and enchants us all with smiles! (kiss on cheek) May the words of his heart forever cradle you on the waves of joy, sweet friend, we all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-16 09:45 PM


this poem is alive with rhythm, spirit, soul and love and flows down the page like forever has taken hold of now.....

wow!!!

Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-02-16 09:50 PM


Susan, you write with a flow of pure honey. This is too wonderful for words.
((Susan))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-02-16 09:58 PM


what a glow of words and their essence comes through hear, a pleasant read!


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5 posted 2002-02-16 10:13 PM


my very essence
having
little patience
to that which does not
give balance
to rhythm, rhyme
to inner cadence
allowing me
no distance
space or time
guidance
comes only
from brilliance
of sun, (in light of moon)
as my ocean's tides turn
I admit, you are, my existence
======================================

oh I love this one....could be read so many ways...as written to a love, or thy muse, or to poetry itself, or to the ocean you adore so...even the rain you crave....very very cool poem of self discovery.
keeping this one for me moth collection

"Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power.  
We have guided missiles and misguided men."

MLK

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6 posted 2002-02-16 10:15 PM


Susan,

   How do you do it? How do you keep getting better and better? I promise I won't tell

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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7 posted 2002-02-16 10:20 PM


*sigh*
Can I send this to someone? I love this!

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-02-16 10:34 PM


....EXQUISITE....

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

Auguste
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9 posted 2002-02-16 10:37 PM


You get a WOW, Susan.   Just beautiful!  (((hugs)))

me

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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10 posted 2002-02-16 10:43 PM


Susan, your essence is one of the beautiful things in this world.....the poem is beautiful and matches you very well
Saunni
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11 posted 2002-02-17 12:08 PM


My goodness, this is absolutely beautiful! Beyond wonderful!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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12 posted 2002-02-17 02:50 AM


I love the rhythm and flow, as if a gentle tide pulled me through the poem. Beautifully done!
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13 posted 2002-02-17 04:51 AM


hey Sandra this was fabulous to read , as you can see by the URL below http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/4450/P5.htm
I often get my inspiration walking by the sea , seems we were both drawn by the same picture
Hope

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14 posted 2002-02-17 09:41 AM


lovely touch ms SEA..I enjoyed it
GenXer
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15 posted 2002-02-17 12:47 PM


Sea - You could not live without poetry, nor could poetry live without you.  Very good.

Dave


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16 posted 2002-02-17 03:08 PM


There is a feeling of completeness to this, that is amazing, Susan.
RosePetal
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17 posted 2002-02-17 03:17 PM


wow this is great writing susan!
I wish I could pen something like this

Martie
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18 posted 2002-02-17 03:21 PM


Susan--Beautiful in every way!  
Larry C
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19 posted 2002-04-04 12:54 PM


*BUMP*

Nicole
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20 posted 2002-04-04 12:57 PM


I really enjoyed this - I'm glad it got bumped back up.  I loved how the picture ties in with the poem.  
Auguste
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21 posted 2002-04-04 01:15 AM


Gorgeous!!   (((hugs)))

me

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

SEA
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22 posted 2002-04-04 08:55 AM


wow, you  all say the nicest things. thank you!! and Larry thank you for da bump
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