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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2002-02-16 09:24 PM

Marigold Morning

Marigold plays upon your face
In light of brand new day
To dress your skin in sunrise lace
Within your soft of sway
~
Ours is an ancient epopee
That writes of heaven's bliss
You give me serendipity
At moist of fevered kiss
~
Even the air that's sighed is gold
In ecstasy of you
To free fall in fantasy's hold
In sip of morning dew
~
And through the calming rush of sea
In dance with open arms
I feel your warmth of reverie
To bathe in deep of charms
~
In gaze I could partake of you
Until the fresh of dawn
Looses it's smile in faded blue
To take her final yawn
To memorize your lids of eyes
With finger's trace in kindred grace
~
At entwine of Venus and Mars
I now have peace anew
Forever scripted in the stars
To find the soul of you
~
With fate we lay beautifully bound
Breathless in sacred place
Within the beat of heart's resound
In silk of love's embrace

By Melissa P. Monette

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-16 09:28 PM

(smiles) This is sooooooooo heavenly beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile, this is absolutely breathtaking and romantic! (kiss on cheek) May your love forever be scripted in the stars and recited in every heartbeat you sigh, we all love you so much, this is one of your best yet! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2002-02-16 10:00 PM

If I were there, you would get one GIGANTIC hug!!!!!!

YES!

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (02-16-2002 10:07 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-02-16 10:06 PM

Ah, deliriously romantic. If ONLY..
You do this so well.
Sandra

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-02-16 10:19 PM

Even the air that's sighed is gold
In ecstasy of you
To free fall in fantasy's hold
In sip of morning dew
~
=================================
~
In gaze I could partake of you
Until the fresh of dawn
Looses it's smile in faded blue
To take her final yawn
To memorize your lids of eyes
With finger's trace in kindred grace
~
===================================
~
With fate we lay beautifully bound
Breathless in sacred place
Within the beat of heart's resound
In silk of love's embrace
=====================================

Melis this is so lovely and your trademark for imagery enhanced romance is on display here...as well your mastery of theme intend and vocabulary. I knew it was gonna be classic Melis poetry from the title.
wonderful write girlie

"Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power.
We have guided missiles and misguided men."

MLK

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-02-16 10:24 PM

Get your monopoly money out haa...i love it..
gorgeous sweet melissa..hugs

~Vic

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-02-17 11:58 AM

Melissa this is very beautiful.

((Melissa))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2002-02-18 11:43 AM

missy,

So pretty!

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2002-02-18 01:33 PM

Melissa,

Your romantic heart shines again

You always do this SO well!!! I enjoyed it chickie

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2002-02-18 02:26 PM

What Janet said.........and more. this is just lovely Melissa!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-02-18 05:30 PM

now this is definitely what you do best my friend. . . a perfect symmetry of word and image. . .

great job. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2002-02-18 05:42 PM

*sigh* this is so incredibly beautiful...I love it...What a wonderful morning....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

12 posted 2002-02-18 06:03 PM

"In silk of love's embrace"
Your words are wonderful, lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2002-02-18 06:54 PM

Melissa - stunningly gorgeous, absolutely magnificent. The pic is beautiful...

BC

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