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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-02-16 08:06 PM





His eyes dance like black hollyhocks

within the breeze of his smile

delectable skin of tawny sands

glistening like the River Nile

the rhythm of his body is pure poetry

"Come body surf with me

upon waves of passion

flowing with ecstasy"

the sunset of his lips

umbrella mine from the sun

bathing within his ambiance

sipping of his love

his body utters poetry

within blue larkspur seas


"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
? Confucius


[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-16-2002 08:10 PM).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2002-02-16 08:09 PM


"the sunset of his lips

umbrella mine from the sun"

*sigh*
nicely done

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2 posted 2002-02-16 08:10 PM


I know someone like that great poem.
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3 posted 2002-02-16 08:12 PM


Sounds delicious.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-02-16 08:34 PM


Mmmm wonderful Victoria!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2002-02-16 09:13 PM


sea..thank you so much for peeking Sea hugs

walker..appreciate your comments

thank you dear sandra

nancy..thank you for peeking in tonight hugss

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6 posted 2002-02-16 10:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever feel the sunset upon his lips and feel his heart beat with harmony forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, this is pretty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-02-16 11:14 PM


noah ..thank you so much for your lovely comments..

               ~Vic  hugs

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8 posted 2002-02-16 11:23 PM


Just luscious...James
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9 posted 2002-02-17 12:36 PM


Truly beautiful! It really is! Loved this!

Sauni @~~~>~~

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The River Flows Not Past,
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10 posted 2002-02-17 01:10 AM


beautiful peom...reminds me of how incredible loving someone can be...
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11 posted 2002-02-17 09:30 AM


james..thank you james...hugs

saunni..thank you so much and for peeking in

bella..nice to hear from you and welcome to passions hope you enjoy your stay..

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