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walker
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0 posted 2002-02-16 07:58 PM



Erase with a kiss
any uncertainties
With your touch
make me forget
that perhaps one day
you loved someone else
Find my love
within my soul
capture it
make it yours
and don't ever let it go
Make love to me
like the first time
without any games or doubts
Love me
in white sheets tonight

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with you
1 posted 2002-02-16 08:07 PM


always, I love your poetry
this is wonderful

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-02-16 08:12 PM



Oh sheesh...ok, I'm warm!

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3 posted 2002-02-16 08:19 PM


Find my love
within my soul
capture it
make it yours
and don't ever let it go

Enjoyed walker..lovely words

           ~Vic

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius


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4 posted 2002-02-16 09:52 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo gorgeous and sensual, sweet friend, I love it, your words are always awesome to read! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-02-17 09:11 AM


White sheets, red sheets, lavender sheets..
Any sheets at all.  This is beautiful.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-02-17 11:35 AM


Love it.....I mean love the white sheets.....and eh......all between....

Charisma

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7 posted 2002-02-17 12:09 PM


This is just lovely and romantic, walker.     Enjoyed!

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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8 posted 2002-02-17 12:11 PM


Walker...this is GOOOOOD...nice write..
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9 posted 2002-02-17 01:32 PM


Wow walker, I love this!  Though, I agree with Sandra...forget the sheets, get on with the good stuff.  lol
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2002-02-17 02:04 PM


Even red sheet would work...enjoyed this...James
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11 posted 2002-02-17 02:07 PM


WOW!!!Sensually passionate...I love it...Have fun in the sheets no matter what color they are...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rebekah33
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12 posted 2002-02-17 02:17 PM


So sensual   You just really captured purity within the poem (even though these lovers had made love to other people before) It was a really good read.  Thanks for sharing.
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

Larry C
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13 posted 2002-02-17 02:29 PM


walker,
How about no sheets?

[This message has been edited by Larry C (02-17-2002 03:30 PM).]

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14 posted 2002-02-17 02:30 PM


walker,
This is so hot...it's smokin'!

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15 posted 2002-02-17 03:26 PM


Walker,

excellent poem as always! I prefer silk red sheets, oh yeah!

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16 posted 2002-02-17 03:54 PM


walker this is just beautiful...helen
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17 posted 2002-02-17 11:56 PM


Satin or flannel?  Great write....absolutely love it!!!
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