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Listen to the Warm
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Listen to the Warm |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
There is heat, Flowing through our veins to beat, A pumping a thumping Driven by that needed part, Called a heart. There is warm, That will make the head to swarm With thinking of doing, Virus that hidden enter Cause fever. There is pain, An aching that won’t explain, Of leaving and grieving, That pierces though out our life Heated strife. What is smaller than virus? T’is emotion that blinds us. Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Borrowing a line from a favored poet, to twist a turn and leave your own mark...Professor, do you hear the applause? |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Sunshine, Glad you liked it, but I couldn’t hear a thing, Someone’s banging a Rod into misshapen poetry. Gloom “This is the way it was While I was waiting for your eyes ~ To find me.” [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (02-16-2002 06:39 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooooo powerfully expressed, sweet freind, such sorrow fills your words but also I know deep down this strife will be replaced with relief and comfort! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice indeed gloom. I enjoyed this very much, " t'is emotions that blind us..nice, floria Floria |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Mistletoe Angel, You are such a sweet and gentle soul, With always a kind word. Thank you, Strbbux, Pleased you enjoyed, just twisting a few Ideas gotten from my reading. Gloom |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this, professor, though the original poem of this name is one of my favorite. You did something cool with the line. Sandra |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Catilinamoon But this an original poem of that name, Oh, you mean Rod’s I must admit I do like the way he turns a phrase, I just am pleased you liked mine of this name. Gloom |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This definitely had your signature lines in it, and even using Rod's line, the twists in this were amazing, loved it!
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I haven't read Rod in years. Thanks for reminding me to read him again. I enjoyed this warm reflection of yours. "What is smaller than virus? T’is emotion that blinds us." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Professor, see? Twist and turn all you want, when you post here, you SHALL be read! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Mysteria, This is a very modified form, the old 3,7,3 is still there, But I rhymed a,a,(b,b),c,c . McKuen isn’t much about meter of rhyme, But more of emotional expression. “Listen, I don’t apologize for being hard to know ~ I am what I am sulking will not change that but apple pies and warm hands help and I have never known a cat that couldn’t calm me down by walking slowly by my chair,” ~ Rod McKuen, Listen to the Warm “THIRTEEN” Thank you, Midnitesun, Glad you enjoyed, he’s one of those poets I go back to hoping to get a little inspiration. Thank You, Sunshine, Even the Blackness shall be Red on these Blue pages, Glad you tolerate and enjoy my twisting. Gloom [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (02-17-2002 07:50 AM).] |
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