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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
SCARS I have loved and I have lost. To live in this world there is a cost. I give my heart out to be broken. I have great dreams only to be awoken. I ride through storms and crest the waves Only to know I will never be saved. I live in the dark and search for the light, Never to rid myself of my plight I look for the stars in the night skies. I look for truth but I only find lies. I try to remember to believe in good, But I cannot forget where I have stood. Time may heal some of my pains But my heart will never lose its stains. Things will become easier. I know they will. But some scars will never heal. "What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, and those scars may forever be etched in your heart, but I know deep down you will find happiness that will also touch your heart forever and bring ease to your pains! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Angel Girl, After a while you will never notice them. Good write. |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Thank you both for your responses. I know that time helps, but I keep wondering how much time it takes. "What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is quite a lot here to take in. How proud you must be to have let it out. Good for you! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Angel girl, I am sorry for the pain that you must have felt when writing this, and hope the moment this poem hit the page, your heart was lightened by releasing these words. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
angel girl, how well you empty your sadness. Love is to be multiplied and pain is to be divided. Thanks for dividing and sharing a piece with me. ((angel girl)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Writing really did help me I think. It did feel good to let some of how I feel out and put it on paper. Pain is definately much easier to bear when it is divided and shared. I wish I would have realized that sooner, but it's better late than never. Your comments mean a lot to me. Thankyou for taking the time to read my poems and giving me feed-back. "What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been." AOL IM: fallprincess69 [This message has been edited by angel girl (02-17-2002 04:33 PM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
angel girl, I can soo identify...some scars can never heal...there is no cure. But most will be erased by the good things in life. Great poem. |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
emotions flowing from where they truly reside it's hard but it's worse when you can't help but reside in past. the light eludes i know. keep up the good work. and keep serching. my heart to yours |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
so many truths, so little time... you are so blessed to be able to see so clearly... yes, some scars never heal but they don't have to be open wounds they are stripes we wear proudly teaching us how we have survived and conquered certain pains, learning new lessons along the way... well said in this verse! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
angel girl, this is very well expressed. I am sorry about the pain you feel. I know all about pain and scars. There may be scars, but the pain will lessen. |
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