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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-16 04:10 PM


ROMEO
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/16/02

I will be your romeo
You will always be my Juliet
I will be your Michelangelo
I will paint your skies with sonnets

Hop aboard my wild stallion
I'll take you over the rainbows
We'll make love throughout the seasons
I will shower you with wild roses

I'll wrap your heart with lace
You veil your face with lavender
My Juliet, lift your veil and let me kiss your face
You are a Rara Avis of an angel I'll love forever

I will always be your romeo
You will always be my Juliet
When I look into your jade eyes I know
We'll forever share lovers dreams not even Shakespeare could have ever dreamt...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-16-2002 04:10 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-16 05:42 PM


Noah, I think you have the biggest heart, ever! This is sooooo sweet
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2 posted 2002-02-16 06:56 PM


Noah not even shakespeare could have written these words of love, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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3 posted 2002-02-16 07:18 PM


*sigh*......you are one wonderful romantic and loving soul dear Noah.....and your love flows straight from your heart

((hugs))
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4 posted 2002-02-16 07:39 PM


awwwwwww, you are more romantic than any famous writer I know of!
This was definitely gorgeous hunny!
(hugs)

your gwenevere

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5 posted 2002-02-16 07:43 PM


May I just say this is wonderful, sweet Noah!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2002-02-28 01:39 PM


Did you know that Shakespear wrote two endings for his play "Romeo and Juliet"?
Is'nt it ironic and sad that the public liked the tragic ending better than the happy ending?

paladin

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7 posted 2002-02-28 02:24 PM


Very romantic Noah...may she lift that veil..James
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8 posted 2002-02-28 03:31 PM


well. . . the title just caught my eye Noah. . . and, of course, that was a good thing. . .

you see so well into the heart. . . that's a good thing too my friend. . .

well done. . .

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9 posted 2002-02-28 03:38 PM


Noah,

This is very romantic!  I loved it!

~Laura~

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