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Eyes Of Mine |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“EYES OF MINE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ My eyes are sincere, telling, will talk tender words to you… Saying things of romance, into your recesses, to accrue… Soft as candlelight, deep blue, in the dimness, shade of grays… They will speak ever softly, are only for you, always… Piercing at times, you’ll see, teasing, in a certain situation… Deep with passion, always true, to be trusted, won’t abandon… Eyes of mine loving you, whispers of deep sincerity… Once you have known them, haunting, will they always be… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is so tenderly written from your golden heart! May whispers of true love forever sigh from her eyes and lips and fill your heart with eternal happiness! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Better check where looking. LOL enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Wonderful Bill!"...*Nancy sighs, her green eyes looking back at him in awe.* ~Hugs, Me~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you know what I think...I think she is incredibly blessed to gaze into your eyes and see the light of love shining there. Beautiful, Bill, simply beautiful....**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sometimes, it is all in the eyes. Great write, BC! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...So very romantic and sincere words. I love the elegance of your writing. They always speak to my heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is outstanding writing the pictures and feelings are so clear in this. The flow is absolutely perfect, writing doesn’t get much better than this Truly one of your utter best, it is absolutely excellent writing, the form is divine and the style just screams class. This is a superb piece of writing, don’t ever stop darling boy because where would we be without beauty?    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love this one bill..the eyes always tell the story dont they...nicely done.. Vic~ "Silence is a friend who |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, eye, eye Cap'n. The eyes have it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ I believe the eyes are the window to the soul, and often speak louder then words ever could....this is beautiful.... Lauren~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
 I loved this one, Bill...its so romantic! Soft as candlelight, deep blue, in the dimness, shade of grays… They will speak ever softly, are only for you, always… copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Eyes of mine loving you, whispers of deep sincerity… Once you have known them, haunting, will they always be… The eyes..hmmmm...they are portals to our essence. I love this Bill. Beautiful. Sincerely, Regina |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I really love this one! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Lovely Bill, "Eyes of mine loving you, whispers of deep sincerity… Once you have known them, haunting, will they always be…" Beautiful lines here, floria Floria |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* Love it when your romantic muse weave words of love Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Eyes can say so much, when they want to. Liking this one lots. Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*bounce* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - Yes, they do say that the eyes are the windows of the soul. Well done. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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