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Dashed Upon the Rocks
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Dashed Upon the Rocks |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Dashed upon the rocks Hope shattered and abused When will I ever learn To not become enthused High can only mean a low Will follow quickly thereafter I find myself on the floor Looking up at the rafter Heart calms rapid beating Breath returns to norm Equilibrium found After emotions storm Sadness now enshrouds Where passions once played Dreams of what would be Languish into fade |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Excellent write, enjoyed |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Oh my gosh...did this ever hit home...I have the problem of becoming to excited about the possibility of a dream coming true as well then I wake up to the true reality....*sigh* guess I will never learn that dreams are just dreams...My heart goes out to you, dear one. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sharon, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope all is well with you now and you have found a dream to hold close forever with cheer! (kiss on cheek) Many dreams may never come true, but I believe a few ones we love most of all can! We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Stop that. Dreams only die when you bury them. Don't make me come typing after you... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Enjoy the dreams .... as they are happening... don't wait or look for the rock to fall on your head... like I do LOL For all we have is today [This message has been edited by Zinsser (02-16-2002 01:52 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thank you for sharing this beautiful, soul wrenching poem with us, PDV. It really struck a note with me  Actually it struck a whole chord. It always seems that when life becomes really fantastic, I end up paying a very steep price for it...with something very tragic. I wrote a poem about this some time ago, called "Silver Lining". If I can dig it up, I'll post it here for you. I hope that things turn around for you soon. lots of big huggss copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ope shattered and abused When will I ever learn To not become enthused Can relate to this Sharon. A great write hugs. Maree |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
PdV, You better listen to serenity. Pity parties are best enjoyed only if they're brief!  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellently said. But would the valleys be as gorgeous without the gloriousness of the mountains and vice versa? How would we recognize the magnamity of either without the other? (easily said in the high times) Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Relating in a BIG way. But the strangest thing is, I feel worse when I am not getting excited about something, even when I know the outcome will be bad. I'm not sure if they call that crazy..lol. Oh well. Sigh.. Peace Sandra |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!! I appreciate your kind replies and your commiseration. I tend to get too excited sometimes and then when it's brought to my attention I feel foolish!  |
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