Flesh in the Shadows..Eagle Ones Flesh Challenge

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Victoria

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0 posted 2002-02-16 09:14 AM

The sweet flesh of the night is upon us
sultry winds clawing the windowpane
entwining within raven hair
red fingernails mauling shadows bare
the taste of flesh upon wanton lips
tempting the night with passion
silhouettes touch like an eclipse
skin to skin, flesh to flesh
silk stockings ..sable mesh
black heels and legs that caress
ruby thoughts and scarlet pleasure
porcelain skin and alabaster
Flesh to Flesh, Lips to Lips
Haunting eyes of a violet aster

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-16-2002 04:17 PM).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

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Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-16 09:18 AM

Victoria,
Wow this is warm enough to be an adult write ,
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

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USA

2 posted 2002-02-16 11:37 AM

Wow Victoria, this one got me sweating just a little bit. Very steamy.

Dave

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-02-16 11:43 AM

Vic,
Two WOWS from me. Enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-16 12:27 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is very sensual, sweet friend, such gorgeous passion shines from your words and fills these pages with gorgeous imagery! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always so beautifully inspiring, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

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MA, USA

5 posted 2002-02-16 12:57 PM

Beautifully expressed, Victoria. Sensual; yet smouldering with passion, with the fire of sensuality. ***Ivy Rose

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-02-16 03:22 PM

kethry..i dont think it is steamy enough for adult ha..
but im glad you think so..thanks kethry

dave..sorry about that haa

sy..was an interesting challenge..now your turn haa

noah..what would i do without you sweet guy

ivy....thank you..it was a fun challenge..glad you liked hugs

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

7 posted 2002-02-16 04:12 PM

And I love it, too. With a bunch of Wows!!!!
((Vic))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2002-02-16 04:17 PM

~V~

ummmm WOW so many wows here, vivid images, softly spoken....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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Victoria

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9 posted 2002-02-16 09:44 PM

thank you newell..for your wows ha

thank you so much lauren..im glad you enjoyed too hugs

Auguste

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By the sea

10 posted 2002-02-17 02:16 PM

Victoria, I'm keeping this one.

And yes, WOW! LOL! This one sizzles...

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2002-02-17 02:21 PM

*sigh* oh my this is so very sensual....gives me such feelings of yearning...Magnificent...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Victoria

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Posts 5869

12 posted 2002-02-17 02:59 PM

thank you Michael...glad you like it enough to keep it ha...

karen...thank you so much..glad you enjoyed hugs

jennirey
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since 2002-01-24

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North Richland HillsTx

13 posted 2002-02-17 03:08 PM

Nice images drawn here.. Very real..

Makes you go hmmmmmm!
Thank you

Jen

Treasure every moment that you have!
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the present!!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

14 posted 2002-02-17 03:20 PM

thank you jenn..nice of you to peek in.. hugs

~Vic

doreen peri
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Virginia

15 posted 2002-02-17 11:02 PM

YUM!!!!!!!!

succulent!!

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

16 posted 2002-02-18 03:53 AM

This is an absolute treat, simply awesome! I'm glad you took up the challenge.

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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Victoria

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17 posted 2002-02-18 09:19 AM

thank you Doreen..glad you liked...i enjoyed the challenge...

eddie...thank you so much..and for creating the challenge...i enjoyed writing it

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

18 posted 2002-02-18 09:25 AM

Gosh but your words are beautiful, hey Victoria , I was writing the other night and I was struggling to find this line.
"sultry winds clawing the windowpane" Now I know why I couldn't find it, You had it. LOL.. great lines in here, lovely as usual. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Victoria

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19 posted 2002-02-18 03:03 PM

oh thank you floria..you are so nice..glad you enjoyed

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