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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-02-16 03:00 AM


The complexity
of my complexion.
Cracked porcelain in
dancing shadows of time
painting a line of
experience
across what once was
a smooth visage.
Days and years
speak the stories,
sometimes sad,
not always full of grace.
And yet I face
this reflection
without fear,
without a tear.
For I've been blessed
with another year
to add to
the complexity
of my complexion.


© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-16 04:54 AM


Excellent, I very much enjoyed this.

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-02-16 07:15 AM


Midnitesun,
very smooth write and I like the reflection in this.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-02-16 08:03 AM



Was that you I saw in my mirror? Welcome to my world...

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4 posted 2002-02-16 08:15 AM


This was great...loved it...and hope we are blessed with many years to come

                                ~Victoria~

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will never betray."
— Confucius


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5 posted 2002-02-16 12:22 PM


Thank you dear friends. Reflective moods bring up a different shade of ink each year.
This one is the new color of me. Acceptance, and moving forward.

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6 posted 2002-02-16 01:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Sooooooo wonderfull written, sweet friend, this is such a wonderful expression of acceptance and having faith in oneself for whatever tomorrow brings! (kiss on cheek) May everyday be filled with great hope and happiness for you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-02-16 01:49 PM


Thanks sweet Noah. When you are a teenager you think you are invincible to the outward effects of time and experience. Then in your 40's you try to fight the evidence, or deny it. All of a sudden you reach the 50's and realize what is happening. Some still fight it, others deny it, and some of us accept it and say thank you God, for letting me get this far along my path.
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8 posted 2002-02-16 05:11 PM


Coming into one's own feels great...wrinkles and all..skin just feels good to breathe in.
I appreciate this view deeply. Thanks so much!

Sincerely,
Regina

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9 posted 2002-02-16 05:17 PM


~I just love your new color, and this, how wonderful it is, and you, how wonderful you are. Thanks for an inspiring read Kacy. *Peace you.
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10 posted 2002-02-16 05:29 PM


Well done, Kacy.....our complexions are so complex.  The skin is actually the body's largest organ.
I never had any complexion problems with zits and the like when I was a teenager...but yesterday morning I woke up with a large pimple right between my eyebrows, and I am a grandmother...  I must be getting younger...right!


copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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11 posted 2002-02-16 06:09 PM


Thank you, Regina. By your photo I'd guess you won't have this problem for a very long time.
Spitfire, how nice of you to visit. Sigh, I finally realized I wasn't 25 anymore.
Lyra, that is funny...at least from a distance. Let me know if and when the reversal takes place, I just may welcome a zit under those circumstances!

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12 posted 2002-02-16 07:01 PM


Wow what a great write, the complexity of my complexion, we all have those worries don't we,you make it fun. great write, floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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13 posted 2002-02-16 08:04 PM


Floria, thanks for stopping by. That's the only way I can look at it. I've always heard frowning makes more wrinkles than smiling and laughing.
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14 posted 2002-02-16 08:18 PM


Well, that is an attitude I need to cultivate.Ya know, the wrinkle part doesn't bother me too much,but there are other..more insidious changes..Aack.
Sandra

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15 posted 2002-02-16 08:26 PM


LOL, Sandra, yes there are some other things that aren't very pleasant, and each decade seems to bring on another unexpected aspect of growing up.
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16 posted 2002-02-16 09:16 PM


Nice depth to this, a few layers deep (7 to be exact)
and i get what you are saying about
acceptance; our 'makeup' (no pun intended)
and living with things that may disturb our self perception.
Cool write, Amigo!
tSR

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17 posted 2002-02-16 09:50 PM



This is wise indeed, and a beautiful write at that, I will share this with my older family....very well said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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18 posted 2002-02-16 10:28 PM


Shadowrider, thanks! I always enjoy your replies.
Melissa, thank you, and hope they enjoy this.

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19 posted 2002-02-18 07:05 PM


Kacy,
Don't look now! You're getting bumped for the rear. beep beep *bump*

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20 posted 2002-02-19 11:12 AM


what complexity
your complexion speaks loudly
of your character

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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21 posted 2002-02-19 12:14 PM


OK bumper car dude, hugs to you. Aren't we having fun with middle aged games?

Interloper, you always such a sweetheart.

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