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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2002-02-16 01:08 AM







Frail afternoons
return soft fingers
to seek delicious desire.
Fingers that gently
caress, touch
those sensitive places
that only true lovers
know about.
The deep moans out
to the deep
inviting the ageless
touch, the stars
to burst upon
fingertips.And,
the Moon to rise
in the loving soul
as moonbeams waltz
to the slow,
minuet of time.


© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2002-02-16 01:11 AM


This is so beautiful Ivy Rose.  It exemplifies the awe of what humans can attain.

So gentle and soothingly penned.

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2002-02-16 01:28 AM


This is Gorgeous, gentle, sensual... great meta4s... Mystic and myself loved it

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-02-16 10:03 AM



Darn! I wish I had written this!  It's a Keeper!

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-02-16 10:14 AM


This is soft soft soft, lovely write Ivy, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Startime
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5 posted 2002-02-16 10:34 AM


*sigh* oh gosh...this poem is sensual perfection, Ivy...It is absolutely perfect and flows with such passionate grace..I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-02-16 10:39 AM


Ivy Rose,
As pretty and sensual as a rose. Enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-02-16 01:19 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...this is sooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, moonbeams always dance across your words and light love to these pages! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2002-02-16 04:11 PM


Ivy Rose - lovely write. Love to watch moonbeams waltz... and fingertips to touch.

BC

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