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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-02-16 12:41 PM



Substitute Post Poem
By Larry Chadwick



It’s just a little substitute,
For what I tried to post.
I keep it right close by,
Just for when I need it most.

It needs no explanation,
And I wouldn’t even try.
It’s a good thing that I have it,
Or I would surely cry!

February 15, 2002




© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-02-16 12:44 PM


I honestly think I understand this...and that scares me a little.  lol  
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2 posted 2002-02-16 12:49 PM


aww shucks...

a substitute?????

does that mean i can't get away with not doing my homework?

geesh...... hope so... the principal lesson in all this is that i can't keep up with the assignments...

no wait!! i'm talking about something else.. never mind...

cool rhyme, Larry C.... what WERE ya gonna post? LOL

Larry C
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3 posted 2002-02-16 02:32 AM


Duncan,
LOL Well when I posted that heart shaped poem this was my backup. But you know...just can't leave it laying around.

dor,
You always make my day! See Duncan's note. LOL Too tired to say it twice. Not that you aren't worth the trouble.

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4 posted 2002-02-16 12:34 PM


Never! a poem should always stand on its own..
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5 posted 2002-02-16 12:37 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh Larry, I know just how you feel, sometimes I make mistakes posting something too so I just have to let my words pack their bags and take a vacation and get a tan in the sun, while my other words fill in their positions! (giggles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always mean so much to me and us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-17 10:01 AM


Cute substitute.  Would have loved to seen the heart.  Enjoyed.
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7 posted 2002-02-17 10:27 AM


I like this Larry, Very nice read. Kinda reminds me of an essay i wrote in college. The subject was " to define a problem and sort through and find the answer" I turned not being able to come up with a problem to write about,  into an "A" paper. kudos

Jen

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Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the present!!

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8 posted 2002-02-17 10:27 AM


I like this Larry, Very nice read. Kinda reminds me of an essay i wrote in college. The subject was " to define a problem and sort through and find the answer" I turned not being able to come up with a problem to write about,  into an "A" paper. kudos

Jen

Treasure every moment that you have!
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the present!!

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9 posted 2002-02-17 10:49 AM


enjoyed
Larry C
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10 posted 2002-02-17 11:12 AM


fateride,
...a great plan when it works. Thanks.

Noah,
I always chuckle at the posts under construction.

texasrose,
Thanks for stopping by and here is the link to that poem: /pip/Forum58/HTML/000135.html

Jenn,
I think your essay sounds very interesting. lol Creative indeed. Thanks. Glad to see I'm not the only one who has double posted.

vandana,
Thanks.

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11 posted 2002-02-17 11:38 AM


LOL...I have little 'ditties' like this sitting in my notepad on my desktop.  Only mine start out to be long poems, which I never get around to finishing, so I use them in an emergency, as is, or get fed up and post them as really really short 'thoughts.'
Love this Larry....nice to know I'm not the only one who does this!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

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