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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
In quiet moments by some trick acoustics it occurs to me, I hear the the tick and hum of some elusive ghost machinery, whose constant pulse does mimic mine, by gimmick or by circumstance, 'til urged as if by grand design, we merge in a surreal dance. The motion of the dancer sways to notions of the gears which spin. Emotion matters not, nor fears, the cadence knows that it will win, and so we dance,this ghost machine, enhanced, but not enough to tell, one step away from what it means, that which eludes us much as well. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smiling..once again you read so easy, and offer up some intricate ideas in a deceptively "simple" construct. I always love the message of your work, but the details are amazing. You know your stuff, Doc!  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
your meter, your cadence, your verbiage, your imagery, your perception, and your presentation.... all...... awesome!!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I agree with both ladies above, they said it better then I could! Great stuff, Doc! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, your words are always so harmonic to us all, this has wonderful use of cadence and voice, we all love you so much! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
like this very much arthur |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Those wheels seem to stay in synch even we we move out of gear. I enjoyed reading this one, it stimulated my gears. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity, Thanks so much. There seems to be something about iambic tetrameter that draws me to it. To me, it's almost like a second language. That, coupled with an internal rhyme scheme, just rolls right off the tongue.thanks again. Doc doreen, Coming from one who obviuosly enjoys words as much as I, this is high praise indeed. Many thanks. Doc Martie, Thank you! Congratulations again on being published. A well deserved honor for one of your talent. Doc Noah, I'm glad you enjoyed this, and thanful you took the time to reply. Doc arthur, Thanks for thr r&r. Glad you liked. Doc Midnitesun, Thank you, it's always a pleasure. Doc |
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