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Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-02-15 09:40 PM



The River Flows Up

An ocean of time has flowed
Under the bridge.
The one that we crossed,
So long ago.
And I have cried a river,
Of tears over you,
Looking back... if we'd known then
What we know now....

Yes, things would have been,
Different for us.
You'd be my husband,
And I'd be your wife.
And time would have taught us
The greatest of truths,
As we shared all the days,
Of our life.

But time has taught us instead,
Another of those truths.
Maybe greater than that,
That true love is from the heart,
Timeless and stronger than the years,
That has kept our two souls apart .

Separated soulmates,
We longed for each other,
Looking back with eyes filled with tears.
Never each one knowing,
They were thinking of the other,
As we walked apart all of these years.

And I could never dream this day,
It was my hope of hopes.
That I would see the river,
Reverse in its direction.
And the paths that we had taken,
Emerging from the darkness,
Into the light of such affection!

Following the river back,
To where we had capsized,
I came to see the shallows,
That floods of emotion pushed us to.
We now have a stronger boat,
To navigate the narrows,
The purest love, our compass,
I'll wait for you, I'll follow you.



Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

© Copyright 2002 Sherry Lynn Gardner - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2002-02-15 09:53 PM


Magicmystery - this is the first I've read of yours. Lovely, it's just lovely... So many words of meaning...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-02-15 10:22 PM


You know...this story, albeit true, is just so incredible and remarkable that I just can't help but think there had to be a little magic involved!

Great write my friend!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
3 posted 2002-02-15 10:35 PM


Full of lovely imagery, Magic....a beautiful story.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
4 posted 2002-02-16 12:08 PM


you wrote my heart....

a magic mystery indeed!!!

beautiful!!!!!

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-02-16 10:13 AM



I'm so glad a poetic streak runs in your family...we are twice blessed by the both of you...

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-02-16 07:18 PM




(sigh) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a  heartwarming series, I love it! (smiles) May you forever sail for the beauty of true love and find eternal happiness always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sherry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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