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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-02-15 09:38 PM


There is not anything left that I can do
To make you know how much I love you
For a little while I felt your love for me
I just knew we were always meant to be

Never thought our love would go wrong
Cause the love I felt for you was strong
About anyone else I never felt that way
It was with you I always wanted to stay

Now it seems as if it is coming to an end
There's nothing I can do to make amends
I am sorry but I won't take all of the blame
It wasn't me who started out calling names

I tried so hard to be a real forgiving wife
But nothing I ever did seemed to be right
I even tried to hang on to the hope you gave
False hope I just didn't know how to save

I never saw the hope you said was there
It seemed as though you just didn't care
The pain I feel I just cannot seem to hide
But I hope it hurries up and does subside

I just don't see that there is any way
For us together to be able to stay
Cause I don't believe there is any true love
And love I no longer want any part of

By Sue 12-31-01


© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-15 10:21 PM


Sadly, I understand where you're coming from with this one. Well expressed, Lady. enjoyed.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

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2 posted 2002-02-15 11:46 PM




(big hugggssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your tears and I pray you find the most beautiful love that will make your heart sing! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, our thoughts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-16 12:26 PM


(hugs) You deserve true, sincere love Sue!
Soon you will find happiness and someone who is really worthy of you.

doreen peri
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4 posted 2002-02-16 12:56 PM




i know this all too well

and blame is the name of name-calling getting nobody anywhere

you brought tears to my eyes

((hug))

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5 posted 2002-02-17 09:36 AM


Sue, I'm sorry if this is your life at the moment. I have been there. It's hard to believe sometimes, that something with so much hope and potential just went away. I'll never understand. Take care
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-02-19 01:55 PM


SmartChick~
Sending *hugs* sweet friend~
Love you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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