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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-02-15 01:48 PM


She Writes
Dedicated to Passions Lady Poets

She writes her pen runs over the page fast and free
Never seeming to pause at all to wait for me
And I running fast try to catch up with her pen
My words tumbling over in their haste and then
She lets fly with a write of such amazing beauty
And I am stunned into saying I love this utterly
She writes and I'm left behind to clap and cheer
I'm left to say well done, fabulous writing dear

She writes her words scampers about with glee
She never tires of writing such wondrous beauty
And I stand still and simply gawk with awe
Then beg her to write please write some more
I try to match her lesser words but it's no use
My words aren't there and the rhyme's too loose
She writes and I'm left to wonder how she can
I'm left saying oh dear if I weren't who I am

She writes her pen dancing with words' delight
She speaks of wonder and the starry night
And I can't stop my eyes from leaking tears
When her words illumine me and show my fears
I'll never have the talent that she can call
And my words won't dance they'll simply fall
She writes and I'm left heaving a long sad sigh
I'm left as her golden words fly long and high

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (02-15-2002 03:44 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-15 01:52 PM


Mushy, this is awesome.  Thank you for such a beautiful gift.  Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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2 posted 2002-02-15 02:05 PM


She writes with a heart filled with joy
pleasing each Passion girl and boy
Within her words magic she weaves
filling hearts with the love she leaves
Dearest mushy, our Marsha she is
giving love with each word she says


I just could not resist the prompting of my muse to write this about you for you, dear one...are a most amazing poet who fills me with joy every time I read your poems or comments...I love you, dear one...you are treasure to us all and priceless in every way. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-02-15 02:09 PM


Marsha - and you write very well indeed...

BC

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4 posted 2002-02-15 02:16 PM


Marsha, I love the way you write! To me, you are an exciting inspiration, a living breating fiery Queen of Lady Poets, flying high in the sky of burning desire, with a flaming fire, that is unquenchable.

And isn't this fire of desire, God's power of poetry? Never, ever put yourself down. God gave each one of us, unique exciting gifts of talents and beauty. And he especially smiled on women, and I believe favored you, among them.

Remember, that all of us are uniquely different and wonderfully made splenid!

So you should never ever want to write like anyone else. Sure, admire and complement their fine, but different words, works and ways.

But you, my dear, should only, always write from the wondrous music God put in your own soul, as Marsha, as Mushy! Releasing that burning exploding flaming fire from within your heart and soul. As I've seen you do, so splendidly. It is this, your own unique spirit of love, exploding all heavens, creating new galaxies, striking others with your lightning flash of desire. This you do so well! This I love from you. I love you Mushy! Your poetry is in my heart and soul. Your writing makes me whole.
((Marsha))
-newell




Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-15-2002 02:21 PM).]

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5 posted 2002-02-15 02:33 PM


Our sweet Mushy writes with a cheerful quill
Writing words of love as he happily trills
Her love across these pages with gentle grace
We all love you so much, dearest friend, you are a delight to us everyday



OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You are such a  delight to us all and we all love you so much, your words always mean so much to us all! I LOVE IT!!! This is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-15 04:07 PM


Marsha,
only you can write the music of my soul and you do it so exceptionally. Are you sure this isn't a self portrait? This is how I feel when I read your stunning work.
Kethry (who may writewell occasionally, but who doesn't hold a candle to you)

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2002-02-15 04:19 PM


What a wonderful gift you penned here Marsha, thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts. *Wish I could do some of the things you said above, but alas my muse is gone*

but it was very nice to read your wonderful tribute to passions lady poets.

((hugs))
Charisma

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8 posted 2002-02-15 04:42 PM


Marsha, as I read this I wondered to myself how you could think this way...when it is the way I feel!  You Mushy Girl are the one who can rhyme devine!!  Just about everything I write is free verse, and I look at yours and wish that I could do that just once!  I wonder if we all look at others writing and feel somewhat in awe?  Guess that's what makes us unique...and you are a wonder..a beautiful free spirit, and it shows!  You glow girl!
~Luv and Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

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9 posted 2002-02-15 04:49 PM


Mursha,
Love the way you write. Well done.

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10 posted 2002-02-15 05:27 PM



Indeed, you do write for the lot of us, and we marvel at your bubbles....for there is not a mushy bubble among them, they sparkle and gleam with the sheen of rainbows...

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11 posted 2002-02-15 05:52 PM


Dear Marsha,
You said this so well. It's exactly how I feel sometimes. How did you know?

Nan

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12 posted 2002-02-15 06:07 PM


Marsha

Excellant work i look forward to going through this wonderful site and read more of your poetry,  and that of the other in this fourm. Here is to the poets who help inspire others with thier poems.

Keep up the GREAT work


  This star is for you


    

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13 posted 2002-02-15 10:52 PM


Marsha...this is so very beautiful.
You, my dear, are the one who possesses the magic quill.
A heavenly poem...thanks for sharing it with us.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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14 posted 2002-02-16 03:11 AM


I never liked mush for breakfast until I read Marsha's mush. This is incredible! How do you do it, over and over again? You must have a special magic pen.

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15 posted 2002-02-16 08:19 AM


Hi Marsha, I love this, and I think you must give youself credit for being one of those you speak of.
Sandra

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16 posted 2002-03-19 10:33 AM


Donna darling girl thank you so very much, the bouquet of compliments does indeed go to you all. Thank you for the light you shine


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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17 posted 2002-03-19 10:35 AM


Karen darling girl than you so much I shall treasure that for all time. You are an utter inspiration you know


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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18 posted 2002-03-19 10:35 AM


Bill darling boy thank you so very very much, you know how much I value your opinion


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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19 posted 2002-03-19 11:14 AM


Newell darling  thank you so very much, the words you say caress my soul with gladness and delight. It’s not that I wish to write as someone else its that I see their talent and feel so awed by it all.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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20 posted 2002-03-19 11:15 AM


Noah darling boy thank you so very very much


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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21 posted 2002-03-19 11:16 AM


Noah darling boy thank you so very very much


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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22 posted 2002-03-19 12:01 PM


Kethp darling sister of my soul you know that isn’t true darling heart, YOU soar and I’m the grub waiting for you to land. Always you inspire challenge and give.  


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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23 posted 2002-03-19 12:13 PM


Charisma darling girl I thank you so very much

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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24 posted 2002-03-19 12:16 PM


Nancy darling girl your writing is utterly inspiring thank you so much for your kind and loving response


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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25 posted 2002-03-19 12:18 PM


Seymour thank you so much


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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26 posted 2002-03-19 12:30 PM


Kari darling sister of my soul ohhhhhhh thank you so much, you know how much I value your opinion your sunshiny smile and your ability. YOU really do WRITE. Thank YOU darling heart always

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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27 posted 2002-03-19 12:31 PM


Nan YOU know that you could have written this better quicker and with more of a internal feel of the poem. Maybe you’d have captured the wonder I feel when I read you.

Thank you always darling heart you are such a fabulous friend


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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28 posted 2002-03-19 12:32 PM


Mystic M thank you so very much I’m sure you’ll find lots of inspiration I always have


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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29 posted 2002-03-19 12:37 PM


Lyra darling girl thank you so very very much, you cannot know what an inspiration your writing is to me. This is so sweet of you THANK YOU

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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30 posted 2002-03-19 12:37 PM


Midnitesun darling girl Magic pen? Moi? No it’s you who has the magic at your command. Thank you muchly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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31 posted 2002-03-19 12:38 PM


Sandra darling girl thank you so very very much YOU write with such charm and grace I think YOU must see yourself in this


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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