(Poem) Rose petals of love.

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haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

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Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-02-15 10:25 AM

rose petals of love.
the experience of falling in love with a desired woman
-- --- ------ --- ------ --- ------ --- ------ --- ------ --- ------ --- ------ --- --

time glistens my gentle smile of contentment
gracefully, as the twilight breeze of change.

the humble essence of the subject in light.
one which incites with no wisdom of, why?

steeling away with kryptonite effects.
replicating a demeanor I fear to fall to.

soft tones of red passion awaits with patience.
fragrance empties the air with it's hand to follow.

rose petals of love, the fruitage of your lips.
ever so succulent as we resemble, nature intend.

spacious feeling of the blissful plight.
rose petals of love.

leading me unripe to the slaughter of heart.
rose petals of love.

dripping with honey and melting in ways.
caught up in entirety, no remembering.

lost now, in rose petals of love.

©2002 hayden a. james

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Nan

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1 posted 2002-02-15 10:31 AM

Very nice, hayden... You've a good sense of imagery to enlighten your readers' senses in turn...

Sunshine

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2 posted 2002-02-15 11:57 AM

Nan said it best...ditto!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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3 posted 2002-02-15 12:04 PM

*sigh* I just melted from the words that flowed with such grace from your pen...this is so incredibly beautiful...You are a magnificent writer.**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

4 posted 2002-02-15 12:07 PM

thanks all... you sure know how to insight my to keep writing...

Much love.

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-15 12:42 PM

(smiles) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly gorgeous, your words always flow like honey among these pages of love! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

6 posted 2002-02-15 12:54 PM

Does that mean I can opost one more of my love poems today?

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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7 posted 2002-02-17 11:52 PM

Hayden-
   Very nicely penned...wonderful imagery.
   I enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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