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Blue Eyes is back
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Blue Eyes is back |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Your eyes show hues of brilliant blue Soulful and come hither And through this look - soul's opened book I'm tossed on winds of whither In eyes of night deep flaming bright Call me to your binding In depths so deep of passion's speak I lose myself in finding Eye candy blue, in which I do Love to drown in fullness In sweet delight, your eyes of night Overrule my coolness I'd say I do to eyes of blue To which my passion rises And hints of green sometimes seen Show depth of your surprises I'm lost to doubt or fear and pout When sunk in blue green wonder The richer hue from eyes of blue Can tear my heart asunder I'll drink blue deep before I sleep And dream of you on waking Those eyes of blue have caught me true And all my lust is slaking Your eyes blue green that fill my dream Are just fine and dandy I would be true to eyes of blue In thrall to your eye candy. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (02-15-2002 10:45 PM).] |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Kethry; I thoroughly enjoyed your poem on Blue Eyes is Back. I'm rather partial to blue eyes myself. :-) Wanda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, Kethry... though I don't think MY blue eyes have ever had such an effect. *G* Very well written! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The eyes have it, Kethry.. Very nice indeed..  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Kethry, I love blue eyes, too. Especially when I look in my mirror. LOL... Your poem is absolutely beautiful. You are a wonderul writer. ((Kethry)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
 I love it...I love it...I love the use of language here that had me smiling with delight the whole time I was reading and then had me reading again...BRAVO!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words have me smiling over the beauty and happiness of love you feel! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever find paradise in his eyes! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very cool write Kethry, it's hard to resist that look sometimes. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - nice write about those blue ones. These I have, but not written about like this... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks, give me a man with deep blue eyes and I could forget the rest - the late nights out - the loutish behaviour - the lack of sensitivity, all that would would be lost and forgiven in the blue eye drowning. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
1 *bump* (no charge)  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I wonder how Frank would have felt about this one...  Enjoyed the read. I'm thinking you'd better be cautious of those blue eyes...from your confession near the end, you could get yourself in trouble.  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Keth this is beautiful. "I'll drink blue deep before I sleep And dream of you on waking Those eyes of blue have caught me true And all my lust is slaking" Simply beautiful. floria Floria |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
When Blue Eyes peer it is almost always comforting, like diving into a warm ocean and it sets the natural tone of flesh off in perfect contrast oh yeah....i like what you have written here and what you write! tSR |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I have blue eyes, Keth....and I come as a lout with lack of sensitivity, too....a complete package!!!  Love the poem...... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Eye candy blue, in which I do Love to drown in fullness In sweet delight, your eyes of night Overrule my coolness Eye candy blue! Oh..that is a great line. I love this. Indeed sweet delight! Great verse Kethry. Sincerely, Regina |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Keth...love the flow of this poem...Even if my eyes are not blue.. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my soul and keeper of my heart, you know I love this, the flow the rhythm the rhyme, it’s all perfect If you want eyes of blue mixed with delight Look to the stars on this star spangled night With eyes the color of a deep sapphire sea There lives a prince who waits patiently Call him to you use your summoning spell Bring him forth to do what he does so well You can gaze into his eyes and look within Smile your winning smile and he’ll give in If you want eyes the color of sapphire blue Somewhere darling heart he waits for you YOU are a fabulous writer and I love love love this   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Keth - Did I tell you already that I have blue eyes?  I must say though, my eyes like to be treated with respect, and not thought of as simply eye candy. They deserve equal rights.lol  Dave |
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