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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-02-15 03:14 AM


A slow shatterd beat attacks
in a raving pace set from
years of lasting existance
stolen in fragmented segments of pain.
When first touched, lingering
just above faulty skin
that laughs at the thought
of anything but pain.
A cry erupts deep inside
shatering the mind of all hope,
falling at last to the ground
nothing, nothing comes to pass.
All truths begin when lies
fail to bring out the past,
leaving you to wonder
what is the source of hope.
A sprinkling of heavens tears
that the angels have lost
spare you the final anguish
of repeating you mistake.
Yet that slow beat still grows,
filling the void you fear
as you gather yourself up,
lifting your eyes to the stars.

© Copyright 2002 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-02-15 07:24 AM



Always lift your eyes to the stars, Michael!  It's good to see you back! You've been away far too long!

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario
2 posted 2002-02-15 12:28 PM


We all feel alone at times, but know that there is always someone here who is  waiting to lift you up so the stars can be yours again.  All you have to do is ask...

Love,
Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



Startime
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3 posted 2002-02-15 12:34 PM


*sigh* shoot..tears flowed as I felt your words..Keep looking to the stars...I believe in magic...and I pray some of it for you...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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4 posted 2002-02-15 12:42 PM


All truths begin when lies
fail to bring out the past,
leaving you to wonder
what is the source of hope.

Hope is hard to find much less hang on to!
Lots of good thoughts to ponder in this,
and I especially liked what you said at the end about
the light from the stars and the hope we might find there.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-02-15 12:52 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Michael, this is so sad but beautiful, my heart goes out to you! (sigh) Always look up to the stars and believe in your heart and your dreams, for the promises will always shine from His eyes and true joy will come to you! We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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