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The Hourglass
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The Hourglass |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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begging rain sands of time count every grain each memory a point of pain falling in a glass contained. the river flows... rivulets cling in the globe. All above, re-forms below; falling in a glass, contained. in clear sphere-- what was once there-- now is here. Top heavy with the weight of fear falling in a glass, contained... Flip the glass and live again. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
ok-- what are you and sharon talking bout this time?-- If poems like these are the result--I am going to have to have a talk with her myself. cheers :J There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn!!!!! You knocked me out with this one! Absolutely incredible. Seriously...and you know, I never say that! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now how did this slip through time so darn fast in here, this was a fantastic metaphorically composed poem serenity.
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Amazing. I sit in my living room and gaze at my hourglass often with all sorts of thoughts, none of which came out this fluently. Enjoyed. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm turning, turning, turning.... and glad I have the chance to do so! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"Tip the glass and live again" love it so much, creative serenity, wonderful write. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, whenever the glass seems half-empty, masy we turn it around and make it half-full! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very creative write Karen and enjoyed sooo very much! ~hugs Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is absolutely beautiful, Karen and absolutely true also.  Its amazing how time rules our lives!copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is excellent writing, so powerful! You blow me away with this! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Very nice and so true Let's keep on flipping as long as we take the good with us The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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