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I Traced You Last Night (Repost from #16)

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I Traced You Last Night
By Larry Chadwick




I trace the highlights of your face,
Feeling emotions that you always share.
Gentle reminders of the reasons why,
I like to trace the lines that are there.

Subtly that line traces down your neck,
Where I find such aromatic memories.
I could easily get distracted right here,
Tracing your line with no time to tease.

And then the rising curves of your body,
Ahhh, yes the high points of my desires.
My pausing here seems only natural,
A place that always starts burning fires.

But there's another place that this line leads,
That little button that invites me to stop in.
A spot that recalls so many happy times,
Just being here makes you laugh again.

Your giggles sweetly encourage me on,
Tracing further past those hips I go.
Mindful of their swaying capabilities,
Seductively reminding me I love you so.

My fingers trace down those sexy legs,
That gives you the power to run away.
While they lift your body up to me,
They provide strength for you to stay.

And then my fingers find your feet,
How they make you putty in my hands.
But don’t forget they’re a source of joy,
Turning most sadness into ticklish plans.

Now that I have traced you from head to toe,
It helps me understand what makes you whole.
I’ve learned to love the completeness of you,
And when I’m done you have etched my soul.

November 13, 2001


This just seemed the right time to repost!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (02-14-2002 09:04 PM).]

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(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully romantic and sensual, sweet friend, may true love forever fill your heart and may she forever trace your heart with joy! (big huggssssss) Happy Valentines Day, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Larry this is a really cute, edgy, sexy poem....but it is so full of sweetness...It just shines with love.

Thanks for sharing it with us!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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OH my YES Larry.....the perfect time....
um, to repost!
~Valentine Hugs to you and your Nancy Lee~
...from this, Nancy Lee....

~Love transcends time and space~

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Larry darling boy, I utterly love this poem, I loved it when I read it before it is utterly full of deep and abiding love. Truly its full of warmth, passion, desire, and true and wonderful love. This should be at the top of the page, that’s what I mean about poems moving too quickly down the page


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (02-14-2002 10:51 PM).]

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Larry - this is warm and sexy my friend...

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I hope she didn't leave without a trace!

Nicely penned, good sir
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7 posted 02-15-2002 10:48 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Good grief...the board is cruising! Thank you everyone for your kind response to my first repost. And Balladeer...she did. Left for Michigan early this morning for time with the grandkids!
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Nice indeed...James
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Thanks James. I see this everday hanging on our wall.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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