to my valentine... (repost from #18)

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to my valentine... (repost from #18)

desperado
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since 1999-05-24

Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

0 posted 2002-02-14 07:49 PM

I give this to my valentine,
whom I love beyond doubt, or reason
I give this gift to you,
my heart to hold through every season
you make me happy just thinking of you
like sunlight through a cloudy day
you make me smile so easily
even when you have nothing to say
your fingers are electric
and they set my skin to charge
the way it makes my mind so clear
it makes the smallest thing seem large
you right me when I'm twisted
and point me to the coast
I love the way you laugh and sing
and yes, the way you make my toast
the simple things you do for me
when the day is old and gone
the way you sleep so soundly
when I rise before the dawn
how I love the days we layed in bed
snuggled deep beneath the covers
talking about our future and dreams
as friends and yes as lovers
so much to say about you
so few ways it can be said
get some sleep tonight my angel
and place your halo by the bed
if you wake up in the morning
and I'm no where to be found
don't be alarmed or worried
it's to your heart I'm eternally bound

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-02-14 07:59 PM

She is a lucky lady to have such a romantic poem penned for her! I wish you and your valentine year-round happiness.

RP

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-02-15 09:57 AM

Hey des... You're quite the romantic one these days, aren't ya??.. Nicely done, m'friend..

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

3 posted 2002-02-15 10:04 AM

That was good man. It's amazing how women appreciate words for a guys heart like this.

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-16 10:40 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know your sweetheart will cherish this treasure forever, we all love you so much! (big hugggssssss) BRAVISSIMO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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