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catalinamoon
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0 posted 2002-02-14 03:19 PM


An easy miss, I guess it was
the hard heart of my valentine
No problem with my heart at all
an arrow through with fierce design.

Cupid has had this deficit
for many years, I think he needs
a replacement, or bifocals
more competence in all his deeds.

Enough of this mismatching now
he needs to straighten out or go
because this time he blew it bad
and he's supposed to be the pro.

Next year I must see better things
from cupid, yes he should beware
and aim his arrows true to mark
my valentine and I, a pair.

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-02-14 03:21 PM


catalinamoon - me thinks me will buy cupid a pair of glasses...

BC

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-02-14 03:24 PM


Do not worry Sandra for we have all fallen victim to this misaim of arrow...sooner or later he will get it right...James
Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-02-14 03:26 PM




Cute write Sandra, and the day isn't over....
maybe cupid had to shoot his arrow from far away and it just hasn't reached you yet.

~Smiles and hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-02-14 03:27 PM


You tell him, Sandra!  And try to have a nice day, anyway!
Sven
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5 posted 2002-02-14 04:25 PM


glasses indeed. . .

remember. . . 7:45 tonight. . .

have a wonderful day my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-02-14 04:29 PM


1derful write
Last time he shot me in the ... well, that's my business

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

strbbux
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7 posted 2002-02-14 04:38 PM


Very very nice Catalina, I agree with Bill. I think he needs glasses LOL.. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
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Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-02-14 04:40 PM


How very cute, Sandra...Cupid is probably getting old and needs some bifocals...
poor little guy.
Happy Valentine's Day

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria
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9 posted 2002-02-14 05:02 PM


yes a vision problem you can say that again haa...and a hearing problem too ha.. enjoyed hon hugss

              ~Vic

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius


amigo
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10 posted 2002-02-14 06:34 PM


Help Wanted - opticians and/or archery pros - call 1-800-passions asap....

nice write here, Sandra...good luck, have kept my fingers crossed here...

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-02-14 10:14 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this reminded me of Hope's poem "Cupid Needs Glasses", this is so sad but beautiful and cute! (kiss on cheek) Very soon cupid will accurately pierce your heart with loves arrow and you will find true eternal happiness of love forever! WE all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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