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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2002-02-14 02:33 PM


Sometimes I think of you,
Haven't got a clue what to do,
Can't blot out this vision,
Constantly in my heart,
My mind says let go,
Carry on without you,
My heart on the other hand,
Clearly wants to make a stand,
Tell you how I feel,
Make you come back to me,
Tell you what your missing,
But something tells me you still haven't
got a clue as to how my heart goes pitter patter,
Whenever your in the room,
Once we had a magic all our own,
But now you share it with someone else,
Still my heart has a mind of it's own,
How can I begin to walk away,
Start anew find the real Love,
When your eyes seep into mine,
Let go, Let go it is time,
Time to resume a life of my own,
Let the light of the day,
Start with someone who loves me,
Not another.

© Copyright 2002 Rose - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 2002-02-14 02:35 PM


Rose...it does sound like time to move on, goodbyes are never easy and sometimes the past seems closer than it really is. There's enough magic in that heart of yours that you don't need borrow from anyone else.
Hugs
Ruth

~ Ruth
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Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02
Posts 325
CO
2 posted 2002-02-14 05:21 PM


Sometimes it is hard to move on from someone, but sometimes it is for the best, and if not, something will likely move you on one way or the other, with even worse consequences.  Nicely done!

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-02-14 06:01 PM


Yes finding the right one is important...then it will be your magic...James
Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-02-15 09:22 AM


Look forward.  It is easier to find happiness than when looking behind

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-02-15 03:20 PM




(sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy you had the courage to express yourself like this, I know how hard it is to say goodbye, but once you pass this step and go on and find what your heart desires, you will feel so much happier in the end! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rose, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-02-15 03:34 PM


Interloper took the words right out of my mouth.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
7 posted 2002-02-15 10:48 PM


letting go is never easy, but you have prepared the way in this write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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