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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-14 11:11 AM


Valentine Angel
By: Noah Eaton
2/13/01

She leans gently over her balcony in her palace of the clouds, letting her soft brown bangs fling across her sky bluish-green eyes as she smiles
She is the descendent of the god Eros, holding her true promise that she would offer the universal love she possesses in her goddess soul
Wearing a pink and red dress with white trims gently whispering with universal love, with white wings unfolded like that of a dove
Her long brown hair gracefully sliding over her eyes and back again as her lips kiss the rosewood pink-lemonade moon as it grins contently at her

She leans over from a floating white palace high in the cotton fluff mountains of heaven, porcelain pillars waxed in starlight, golden fleches standing tall above the clouds, basking in smiling sun
Baroque coming stairways of pure light and hallways emblazed with the azure skies leading to the many magical horizons of heaven where lovers souls embrace together under the gazebo gardens
Above a debonair lounge gleaming with light, surrounded by the beauty of nature, where she and the Empyreum society gathers together to discuss the deliverance of love
Born in the warm-hearted lap of the mother cupid with a heart birthmark on her forehead, she was chosen in consensus of the gods to be loves messanger of these times

She sits peacefully in her sacred gardens surrounding her mystical library atop the palace, researching the art of love, determining the soul each and every person will share love with, recording the names in her sacred texts
With a doves feather pen, filled with ink of that of a rose petal, she writes the names, immediately turning to stone as a promise this true love was meant for everyone
She sits barefoot, smiling as she raises her head every now and then to join the cupids and seraphs in Heavens Prayer To Thou Loving God, her eyes closed as her hair sings with her lips
The pages of her book left turning in the wind, in which she holds in her hands, letting her written names receive the love they await, as faint shadows of the magic words tide away in her mellow breath

Atop the blue dome of the palace before dusk, the cupids and the gods and she, the Valentine Angel, float above the clouds, alined together, with arms stretched out, partners hands held together
Worshipping combined spirits power in Spirits Bridge, as they slowly lift their arms high up in the air until their hands clap together gently
Breathing life into souls rainbow, painting end to end, leading lovers to one end of the rainbow to the other to find their devoted loves
Singing His teachings taught to them from before, spreading His wisdom to His world of creation below

“With the way of all creation, let this day bring new love to many
Heaven forever hovers high, let love forever preserve all spirit
Robin, pluck the lyres of lovers time, let spring commence the plenty
May their blessed lives continue,
let the singing sparrow of sharing of souls cry on through all seasons”

She holds her harpsichord bow in her hands, leads melting with honey as she plays the whimsical hymns she learned from Him
Her doves wings fluttering gracefully in the perfect blue skies as she plays the Anthology Of Loves Songs with the cupids, firing arrows down at each heart one at a time, jetting through the clouds like lightning
Lightning crashes somewhere in the world, every crash the sign of a lovestruck heart, the embracing of twos hearts, in one second melting into a calm serenade spreading about through ones lips
Her bow shining with rainbow light as she stares attentively into the eyes of each searching soul, guiding longing souls one step at a time closer to the magic

She and the cupids lacrimate tears from their eyes, tokens of good luck to the lovesick and the lovelorn, multiplying into misty rainshowers, faith tapping the throat of a lost soul
The drizzles of sincerity bathing hearts of drought, showers of kisses of the gods cradling the astray, putting them back on their feet with will and assurance
Loves spirit thriving all darkness, His nightingales and robins and sparrows always here to identify ones direction from false love and all without purpose
She conducts the power of love as it spins around her, the tornado of creation sidewinding through the curtains of space

She flutters high above the world, smiling down upon all of us, as she wishes us all a Happy Valentines Day
Commencing this special day as the day all of the world sings together with the magic of love, passing the word on to everyone
Reminding us that Valentines Day is forever in lovers hearts, chocolate dreams and lovers fantasies swimming on and on in the tides of time
Reminding us that love is forever…

HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!!!


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-14-2002 11:11 AM).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 2002-02-14 11:26 AM


Today fairytales and reality meet.  Happy Valentines, Noah!
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2 posted 2002-02-14 12:19 PM


I think Duncan said it all. You made this seem so alive, Noah. I love it.
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-02-14 12:51 PM


Noah,
You painted a mural in my mind. Well done.

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4 posted 2002-02-14 12:57 PM


*sigh* I love the vision of love you paint with these words, Noah...absolutely beautiful. **big hugs**
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2002-02-14 02:08 PM


Oooh I love it Noah! I am your valentine angel
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6 posted 2002-02-14 02:15 PM


Ah, great story tellers are far and few between. Love the final lines on this one. Peace to you dear one

~ Ruth
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7 posted 2002-02-14 03:25 PM


Noah - you do weave a story, this is wonderful.  Happy Valentines Day Noah. May peace be in your heart, and your pen forever write...

BC

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8 posted 2002-02-14 03:30 PM


Fantastic...one of my favorites Noah...James
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9 posted 2002-02-14 04:48 PM


Oh my gosh, this is truly wonderful Noah. the first line really grabbed me and drew me in.
"She leans gently over her balcony in her palace of the clouds"  
wonderful. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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10 posted 2002-02-14 04:57 PM


im glad we dont have to wait until valentines day to read you sweet words noah dear...hugss

                    ~Vic

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will never betray."
— Confucius


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11 posted 2002-02-14 10:42 PM


Grimms Valentines???

Very well done Noah

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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12 posted 2002-02-14 10:44 PM


Noah...I am impressed...you have certainly
penned a passel of words here...

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13 posted 2002-02-16 02:07 PM


(hug) I mean *bump*
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