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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-02-14 11:01 AM

You know
How long days are?
How long we have been friends?
How many times did sun
and moon light our dreams
We dreamnt about going our ways
And make our dreams fullfilled
I don't care
If you say It Is all over
I still believe
Our love will grow
more each day
If you give my one more chance
to proove my love to you,
I will try
every thing you tell me do,
You once said that
You loved me
more than anything else
Now you come to me
And you say
It Is all over
I don't care
If you say
It Is all over
You know
How many times
I have held you
In arms?
How many times
I have given you
my everything to you
Now you say,
It Is all over
between us,
But I don't care
If you say
It Is all over
I still believe In all
Where our love would call
And make us believe In
everything.....

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2002-02-14 01:47 PM

Vandana, these are some interesting thoughts...how quickly we can lose that which means most to us...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-02-14 02:02 PM

*sigh* oh gosh...this poem touched my heart...I am so sorry for your pain...I can only hope that soon love will fill your life again. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2002-02-14 02:10 PM

the heart does go on. ((big hugs))
Enjoyed

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2002-02-14 02:22 PM

I do am sorry for your pain, it is good to pour your words out to see more clearly, may love come your way as you deserve, love is not a compromise . Never let go of who you are.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-02-14 02:24 PM

Isn't it always true that we think others love us the way we love them? I like how you hinted on this

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2002-02-14 02:28 PM

Sometimes it's very hard to say goodbye. Much easier for the mouth to say the words than the heart to believe them.
hugs

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-02-14 02:34 PM

This is so sad. Love will come again for you...just believe.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-02-14 03:12 PM

I understand these feelings so well. I fought against his opinin of our relationsip for a long time. It isn't fair, but sometimes we can't change it. Even though they are WRONG.
Take care
Sandra

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-02-14 03:13 PM

vandana - I agree that it's difficult to say goodbye at times. Your thoughts in this poem says what you feel...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-02-14 03:19 PM

I hope for you that it is not over...for sometimes we give up to soon and it is not really over and yet other times it is over and perhaps we need to let go but still be available until we can distinquish the truth of the matter...James

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-02-14 04:54 PM

Vandana, this is so so nice. I feel the sadness, who knows, perhaps it isnt over, who knows. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-02-14 10:41 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Vandana, this is soooooo very sad, my heart goes out to you and hope that true love will fill your heart again and forever and you will never have to say goodbye again! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2002-02-14 10:58 PM

I sure hope you get a second chance. I do like the way you've written this, I guess if nothing else, the end of love does inspire good poetry.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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