quand nous faisons l'amour (when we make love)

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

0 posted 2002-02-14 05:54 AM

quand nous faisons l'amour
when we make love
we are dancers
at the ballet

we are flowers
in bloom
in god's heaven

quand nous faisons l'amour
when we make love
we are the sea
and the sky
where they meet in horizon

we are the mountains
with our valleys damp
waiting for the sun
to taste our rivers

quand nous faisons l'amour
when we make love
we are a man and woman
fitting places together
heart touching

we are poetry and songs
written in warm wax
our whispers melding
to quiet sighs

quand nous faisons l'amour

©Dark

Kethry
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Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-14 07:18 AM

Dark,
I like this particularly the poetry and songs written in warm wak.
Kethry,

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2002-02-14 07:53 AM

thank you ms kethry...I appreciate your eyes

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-02-14 08:19 AM

DS~

All of the above and then some....

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-14-2002 08:20 AM).]

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

4 posted 2002-02-14 08:23 AM

and then some
more
and hours more

thank you Lauren..have a happy V day

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-14 09:14 AM

Yes.....

~Love transcends time and space~

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-02-14 09:23 AM

i love this DS..one of my favorites
Happy Valentines Day to you..

~Victoria~

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2002-02-14 09:40 AM

Enchantress

when you say yes
I smile with blush
thank you

Victoria

gentle kiss to your cheek
and a rose to your hand
and perhaps later

dark desires blend

happy V-day lady...thank you

Martie

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8 posted 2002-02-14 10:40 AM

DS

Tender sensuality...a delight to read.

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

9 posted 2002-02-14 11:17 AM

Thank you Ms Martie..
I appreciate you
happy V day

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 2002-02-14 11:18 AM

Oui!!!
This is very sensual....lovely poem

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2002-02-14 11:36 AM

Hoot' ron...thanks for your review

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2002-02-14 03:29 PM

Dark Stranger-
  Very sensual and beautiful.
  Enjoyed this.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

13 posted 2002-02-14 03:32 PM

ms vicky,
thank you for your eyes
and replies
happy V day to you

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2002-02-14 03:46 PM

Excellent writing...James

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

15 posted 2002-02-14 04:00 PM

humble arrigoto James..
I appreciate you

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

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Tennessee

16 posted 2002-02-16 05:03 PM

C'est le cadeau de l'amour qui nous incite à vouloir respirer.

A treasure.

Sincerely,
Regina

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2002-02-16 05:09 PM

YAY, je l'aime, ceci est tellement admirablement romantique! (big hugggsssssss) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may the enchantment of true love forever scintillate in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

18 posted 2002-02-16 07:03 PM

Very sensual Dark Stranger, and I really enjoyed it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

19 posted 2002-02-16 07:11 PM

I've been sitting at this blank space trying to think of something worthwhile to say...

thank you comes to mind...

Dark Stranger
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20 posted 2002-02-16 07:12 PM

mswood....humble thanks, with gentle bow
and dancing whispers

Noah, friend and poet, thank you for your words

Floria, so pleased to have your eyes touch my words thank you

Dark Stranger
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21 posted 2002-02-16 07:13 PM

Sunshine....and to my mine also
it comes...thank you so much

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

22 posted 2002-02-16 07:15 PM

oh my...oh my...you know how to melt a woman's heart....although mine just did

Charisma

Dark Stranger
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Posts 13631
West Coast

23 posted 2002-02-16 10:28 PM

Charisma....please wear the melting
with a smile
and let me hold the melt in gentle hands

thank you

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