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yesterday, today and tomorrow ...or... 'surround sound valentine'
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yesterday, today and tomorrow ...or... 'surround sound valentine' |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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easy, so easy is the breeze arresting by its freshness young, so young and green just like a schoolboy crush on the bright girl who smiled each time he caught her staring at the presence of him spraying blushes on her rosy cheeks easy, so easy to remember the fleeting glimpses of recall when the girl wanted to run away yet her feet couldn’t move away and I feel held by that careless frolic amongst ‘missing of heartbeat’ scenes of yesterday's memories valentine’s, that is what today is a day made by Cupid‘s design a day to remember when we get old to carry the memories of you and me I squeeze the breeze around me and feel the freshness of the love that surrounds me in nascent air while pure clouds in white hang down like curtains draping the sky and there blooms a yearning like a flower uncurling with the first rays of the day as slanted light beams intersect the beauty that is you and thus this day begins in coloured shades of love tomorrow, I’ll look back to today revisiting scenes of my memory ... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, I do like the repetitiousness of some of the phrasing, like an echo, echo on the wind.... very, very pleasing.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir, I love the way you squeeze the breeze around you Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful write, my friend  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sigh...Simply lovely. The last two lines really completed it perfectly. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, You make the elements into a bouquet and present them to the fair. Well done. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you, I thank you all for your kindness... from deep within my heart... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ My friend ... this is delicately lovely~ *sighs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How nice, to be able to enjoy this fragrant bouquet of love, long after the blush of Valentine's Day has faded. And I really liked that breeze squeeze.  |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sudhir lyer...Your words dance through the heart and burst upon the soul. WONDERFULLY WRITTEN!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, may your sweetheart forever shower you with Valentines and make you feel like that boy all over again forever in love! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you all, my dear friends for your kind words.... and most of all for being you... Regards, sudhir |
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