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Fee
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since 2000-08-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-14 04:34 AM


Friends found within these pages
of hopes and dreams and midnight
graces

Laughter, Tears we have seen it all
as each of us lets our gaurds fall
For here we have truely found
a place which holds no bounds

Hearts worn apon our sleeves
as poetry expresses
what we believe

So settle in and join our home
a place where souls are free to roam
A place that will ensure
that alone you will be never more

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-14 04:43 AM


How very true Fee, and what a nice poem for such to start off the new forum, imagine we are at 19 already!  Very nicely done, I enjoyed it.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.  
Let the reader catch their own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~


Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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2 posted 2002-02-14 07:44 AM


Nicely done Fee, with well expressed sentiments.

kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Siofra
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3 posted 2002-02-14 11:54 AM


You're correct, you know? We are never alone here. Too many friends to surround us for us to sit in the corner. This is lovely.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

vlraynes
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4 posted 2002-02-14 03:36 PM



Fee-
  Our 'family of friends' is a wonderful
  place to be..
  Nicely said.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

vandana
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5 posted 2002-02-14 06:46 PM


enjoy
Larry C
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6 posted 2002-02-20 12:24 PM


*bump*
ecrivan
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my own state
7 posted 2002-02-20 01:17 AM


definitely not alone here


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