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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-02-14 03:13 AM



Happy hearts to Ronnie, babe--
happy lace and pink cut-outs!
Valentines in etch lace grin,
and simple patterns whispered shout.

You my friend, are so devine!
You make me think in quartered rhyme.
You, eternity of time,
a poet's plea of Valentine!

And so I'd like to start this day,
with simple gratitude, your way...
I'm with you, with YOU, "Ronnie babe!"
Happy heart, Valentine's day!

© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-14 03:18 AM


I KNOW. It's AWFUL. I just wanted to be the first... Happy Valentine's day!
Ron
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2 posted 2002-02-14 03:25 AM


At least you left out the fishnet this time...


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3 posted 2002-02-14 03:25 AM



serenity-
  LOL..cute..
  Well, you did succeed at being the first...LOL.
  Happy Valentine's Day to you, my friend.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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4 posted 2002-02-14 03:29 AM



Oh yeah...AND...not only did you get to be
the first to post in Open #19, but I can
honestly say that I have read AND replied to
EVERY poem in Open #19!!  Woohoo!!! LOL!



"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-14-2002 03:30 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-02-14 03:31 AM


LOL, I love the fun of this one. And big midnitesun smooches to Ronnie, babe!
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6 posted 2002-02-14 03:44 AM


Awesome Karen, and I was second Wish we could keep this going, all day!  Thanks for the idea.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.  
Let the reader catch their own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~


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7 posted 2002-02-14 03:45 AM


Okay...I'll testify. I was really bummed out.
Totally down on my luck, had nothing but a chip of a shard of a piece o heart to chaw on....and now THIS!!! izzit possible to sleep while giddy?

smiling here, ya'll er all dolls! especially, Ronnie babe!

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8 posted 2002-02-14 04:43 AM


**First in, best dressed** or should I say written.

Well, what more can I say except I am so so much looking foward to what is to come...


Hugs you guys, Thank you Ron, and ahhh not going to get all mushy, even if it is the day of love.....

Hugs again, Fee

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are the most important aspects, they create impressions

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((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
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9 posted 2002-02-14 07:49 AM


Oh my!!! I love it.


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10 posted 2002-02-14 07:51 AM


serenity, good write. I'll catch him and you kiss him.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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11 posted 2002-02-14 07:55 AM


Serenity,
As you see he loved it. Good Valentine.

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12 posted 2002-02-14 07:57 AM


well played
little girl with scissors
and crayons
doing the walls

cool thoughts

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13 posted 2002-02-14 09:20 AM


Yes, Happy Valentine's day to you both

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14 posted 2002-02-14 09:28 AM


Happy Valentine's day to you
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15 posted 2002-02-14 09:39 AM


Happy Valentines Ron and Karen!  It's a good day to be a poet.
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16 posted 2002-02-14 11:53 AM


cracking myself up today! I don't know why I'm always so startled when Ron makes his presence known...sheesh!

You guys have a great day! Thank you.

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17 posted 2002-02-14 11:57 AM


He was out?  Darn, i missed it!  Startled, I am in shock too!
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18 posted 2002-02-14 12:38 PM


HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY RON!
Great write here Karen.
Gee, I missed Ron....where is my chapstick?
~Valentine Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

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19 posted 2002-02-14 12:52 PM


Poor Ron will need Chapstick before THIS day is over...
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20 posted 2002-02-14 12:55 PM


*giggling* this is a great Valentine to Ron....I love it, Karen
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO YOU BOTH
**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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21 posted 2002-02-14 09:48 PM


Thanks for the laugh, Karen.   

Michael Auguste~
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22 posted 2002-02-14 09:51 PM




YAY!!! Ooooohhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, I just know Ron will love this forever, just as we all love you! (kiss on cheek) HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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23 posted 2002-02-14 09:56 PM


This is great Karen!  I loved this write from you.  Happy Valentines Day to you!!!

   Randy Meador

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24 posted 2002-02-16 02:37 PM


a good *bump*
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25 posted 2002-02-16 03:09 PM



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You can't be more FIRST than by being Number 1!!!

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