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90 degrees & rising

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Tiersdin
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since 11-17-2000
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east coast


0 posted 01-07-2001 04:49 PM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiersdin



It's hot...
steam rises within
causing smooth brown
to glisten

tendrils lay
slick to neck
pushed away as I walk
to the open bay window

leaning on the sill
eyes closed, inhaling deeply
a breeze cools my skin
bringing a hint of salty
sea not far away

I gently rotate my neck
Gauzy, whispy, sheer
white thing I wear
lifting this way & that
at the gentle coaxing of the wind

it's hot...
there you are
resting quietly against
bamboo head board
watching me

your eyes
bring me to you
no spoken word needed
touch says it all

Your fingers
thru my hair
as I shake it back
my neck, an open invitation
exotic, indeed, erotic

It's hot
the heat claims me
you, us,
in this faraway place
where heat is welcome
as is succumbing
to the heat
that draws me
to you


-Tier{Robin}
11/98


Sunnyone
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since 07-06-2000
Posts 5483
Staffordshire, England


1 posted 01-07-2001 05:50 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

....mmmmmmmm....
love the scene this painted in my mind, and especially the heat!!! It's freezing where I'm at right now!!  Great writing here, and am looking forward to reading more from you!!


Write on!
-<--<--{(@

nakdthoughts
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since 10-29-2000
Posts 19275
Between the Lines


2 posted 01-08-2001 03:42 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

the heat claims me
you, us,
and draws me to you...very nicely done..

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Stan
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since 01-01-2001
Posts 125
Inland Empire Southern Califo


3 posted 01-08-2001 09:57 PM       View Profile for Stan   Email Stan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stan

Robin,  I guess you could say this is rather warm in more ways than one.  Very seductive.

Thanks.

PanDol
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since 03-11-2000
Posts 1273
USA


4 posted 01-12-2001 02:18 AM       View Profile for PanDol   Email PanDol   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PanDol

I felt as though I was watching a movie.
You painted a motion picture for me with your words.
Very soft and sexy....

Wonderful job Tiersden


~PanDol

Sven
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Posts 15611
Lansing, MI USA


5 posted 01-12-2001 01:42 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

oh my. . .

*fanning. . . *

wow. . .
 
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