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Alicat
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0 posted 06-13-2006 10:51 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

Smoke from a half burning cig
smoulders solitary among
burnt out compatriots and kin.
There, seen briefly, memories
of things never befallen waft
gently and then dissolve.

Ali
4/17/06
© Copyright 2006 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-13-2006 11:22 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

hugging me 'cause I can't hug YOU...

this is perfect

and I have been there many times, and all I saw was smoke and silences

you captured this moment so exquisitely, I wish you would re-name it: "tin type"

 
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