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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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0 posted 2006-06-13 10:51 AM

Smoke from a half burning cig
smoulders solitary among
burnt out compatriots and kin.
There, seen briefly, memories
of things never befallen waft
gently and then dissolve.

Ali
4/17/06
© Copyright 2006 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2006-06-13 11:22 AM

hugging me 'cause I can't hug YOU...

this is perfect

and I have been there many times, and all I saw was smoke and silences

you captured this moment so exquisitely, I wish you would re-name it: "tin type"
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